Kolchak Returns

[md_meezer]

August 29, 6:18pm

They say it is the moon shining on the mica in the sand that causes the glow however, here at the Superstition Spring golf course, it is something much more ominous.

It started when some men were playing a twilight round.  The sand trap appeared to  give off a faint yellowish green color.  One of the players hit his ball

Comments

[m_malcontent]

Cute, and smartly done

[md_meezer]

thank you.

[brienneofsnark]

The voice in your piece is fun and engaging. It almost has a tone like one of those Unsolved Mystery shows! Well done!

[md_meezer]

yup. Kolchak: The night stalker was actually a precursor to the Xfiles. really good show.

[flipflop_diva]

This is a type of mystery show I would definitely watch! (Or read about.) Though I think Carla is lucky she did not become the story herself!

[md_meezer]

you can find the original show on You Tube.

[halfshellvenus]

throwing sandy cart parts into the air.
Sandy cart parts! Nice!

I see Carla is named for her grandfather. What will she find? Will she survive to tell anyone else?

[md_meezer]

Yes, Indeed. Just like Carl. :)