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Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon IV

Apr 22, 2007 00:00

Sorted: 149 prompts! Blame the Cat(s).

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for vivien529 archon_mentha April 22 2007, 05:02:37 UTC

Recipient: vivien529
Prompt: Tom, Minerva, cake, snakes, Peeves, hot sex optional (not with Peeves) I did Parseltongue!kink instead of snakes, hope that's okay!
Word count: 300 (One hundred for vivien529, one hundred for Imperio and one hundred for Bestia.)
Rating: NC-17, Parseltongue!kink, Tom=evil

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He hadn't thought it would be so easy to lure Minerva out after curfew: all it had taken was a few sibilant whispered nothings in Parseltongue and the promise of sweet cake in the kitchens.

Tom hated cake.

So when they met in a dark niche halfway between the dungeons and the Tower, he claimed he'd just seen Peeves in the kitchens. Minerva raised an eyebrow but didn't argue, not even when he pushed her against a wall and down on her knees. She went easily, even eagerly, her long fingers reaching into his robes as though she couldn't suck him off soon enough.

When she looked up at him, her lips wrapped around his cock, he knew what she wanted.

"Whore. You'll scream for me before I'm done," he promised in ( ... )

Re: for vivien529 midnitemaraud_r April 22 2007, 05:34:02 UTC

That last line was positively brilliant! You write him so well - chilling as always! :)

Re: for vivien529 bethbethbeth April 22 2007, 11:43:03 UTC

Brrrr! Very believable.

Re: for vivien529 inksheddings April 22 2007, 13:18:16 UTC

He didn't bother to use Legimilency to find out what her romantic, fevered mind imagined he was saying. He didn't care.

Oh, I love this line. Wonderfully chilling drabble. With bonus wall sex! :D

Re: for vivien529 thistlerose April 22 2007, 14:20:26 UTC

Oooh, chilling. In a good way.

Re: for vivien529 hildigunnur April 22 2007, 21:47:16 UTC

300 words of chilling perfection indeed.

Re: for vivien529 snapetoy April 22 2007, 22:50:16 UTC

Oh, I liked this! Really great imagery and a fabulous use of the prompt. *fans face*

Re: for vivien529 kaskait April 22 2007, 23:59:00 UTC

That was very, very good.

Re: for vivien529 dizilla April 23 2007, 19:40:33 UTC

Wow. Slowly I'm starting to love this pairing.

Re: for vivien529 slytherinfiend April 25 2007, 02:44:32 UTC

That was *yummy*. Probably one of the best Tom/Minerva drabbles I've ever read. Realistic. :)

Re: for vivien529 eeyore9990 April 27 2007, 03:11:34 UTC

Haha, I'm still making my way through all these. Absolutely brilliant, hon. I was all "ohhh" and then strangely turned on by evil!Tom (although, do I need the evil! there? hmm, prolly not). This was wicked and sensual and just... awesome!

Re: for vivien529 kethlenda July 14 2007, 20:41:24 UTC

*shudders* Love creepy!Tom so much here--well, "love" may not be the right word, but he's perfect. ;) And the promises. *shivers* Eep.

Well done.

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