Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon IV

Apr 22, 2007 00:00

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a_t_rain April 22 2007, 03:12:42 UTC
Recipient: fabulafaepotter
Prompt: Love is not love which alters when it alteration finds
Word count: 100 (Yay, my first real drabble.)
Rating: G

“Tom!” Merope ran bareheaded into the street. “TOM!!!”

There was no answer; only the clatter of hailstones and the mewing of a stray cat in a London alley, so many miles from her home.

She looked for him all day. In the evening she bought a bottle of gin and finished the cigarettes he’d left on the bedside table and cried and cried, and then threw up in the sink and cried some more. Dawn broke, and she had a thought that made her stop crying.

He might not be hers any more. But she would never stop being his.

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archon_mentha April 22 2007, 05:32:06 UTC
This is heartbreaking, and really beautifully written.

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brockenblue April 22 2007, 15:41:00 UTC
Wow, this is beautiful (in a gut-wrenching sort of way). Merope's story is so heartbreaking, and oddly enough, is perfect to illustrate the theme of love and devotion.

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waterbird April 22 2007, 19:19:14 UTC
Merope is such a tragic figure, and this really shows that. Congrats on your first 100-word drabble!

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youngest_one April 23 2007, 01:56:51 UTC
Absolutely gut wrenching, with a killer of a final line. Well done!

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eeyore9990 April 23 2007, 14:13:32 UTC
Wow, stunning. Great job.

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