Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon IV

Apr 22, 2007 00:00

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mamadeb April 22 2007, 01:26:08 UTC
Recipient: medawyn
Prompt: A moment of peace in the midst of war; any character
Word count: 100 words
Rating: G

He'd poured hot water over twice used bags to make the tea, and there was no milk or sugar to be had, and the spell he used to make the toast had been too strong, so it was burnt, and there was only margarine anyway.

Later, the others would wake up and there would be plans and shouting and then they'd go out to fight or defend, and he'd shout curses and hexes at people he used to call friend - and sometimes that wasn't even a lie, while his own side watched him.

For now, Draco ate his breakfast..

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mamadeb April 22 2007, 18:13:58 UTC
Thank you!

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celandineb April 22 2007, 01:44:03 UTC
That's so evocative of wartime, that breakfast -- and of Draco's likely culinary abilities, too. Lovely.

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mamadeb April 22 2007, 18:14:24 UTC
Thank you - that was my intention.

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merrycontrary April 22 2007, 06:41:57 UTC
Very nicely handled.

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mamadeb April 22 2007, 18:14:45 UTC
Thank you! Draco needs these moments.

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mamadeb April 22 2007, 18:15:20 UTC
He needs hugs, doesn't he? Poor kid.

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bethbethbeth April 22 2007, 10:59:41 UTC
An all too believable moment...well done.

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mamadeb April 22 2007, 18:15:34 UTC
Thank you so much!

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amanuensis1 April 22 2007, 14:16:18 UTC
I'm about to cry. Oh.

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mamadeb April 22 2007, 18:15:52 UTC
Oh. Wow. Thank you!

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medawyn April 22 2007, 17:37:54 UTC
Beautiful - you captured so much in such a few words. Thanks!

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mamadeb April 22 2007, 18:16:14 UTC
I am *so* glad you liked it. I hope it was what yo were hoping for.

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waterbird April 22 2007, 20:12:01 UTC
and he'd shout curses and hexes at people he used to call friend - and sometimes that wasn't even a lie, while his own side watched him.

I love this line in particular, because it shows that Draco is aware of what his choices have cost him - and that the side he's chosen doesn't entirely trust him.

Very nicely done.

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