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TEAM ANGST: Flesh and Blood, "The Experiment"

Sep 06, 2007 19:10

Title: The Experiment
Author: lunasky ( interview)
Team: Angst
Prompt: Flesh and Blood
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Graphic violence
Summary: They wake up to find themselves in a grey room. A plain, grey room with no windows or doors.

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lunasky September 13 2007, 02:42:21 UTC

Thanks!

argosy September 7 2007, 01:52:45 UTC

Woo-Hoo! So good. I'm in awe of the way you built suspense here. Every word was compelling. The last part of the story was brutal but amazing.

lunasky September 13 2007, 02:42:51 UTC

Hee! Thanks sweetie. I'm glad you liked it.

madeline871 September 7 2007, 02:43:03 UTC

This was really good. I loved the ending- very unexpected!

lunasky September 13 2007, 02:44:58 UTC

Thanks. :)

Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep? steammmpunk September 7 2007, 02:43:52 UTC

Wow, that was really interesting. And hits all my kinks -- Android angst! Wonderfully done.

Re: Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep? lunasky September 13 2007, 02:48:08 UTC

Thanks :) It's good to hear that it worked.

mcalex22 September 7 2007, 12:16:35 UTC

This is incredible! I love it - we spend most of the story wondering what is going on and the reveal was very exciting. The alternate John and Rodney's plan to overthow their "creators" were amazing.

I really enjoyed this. I so did not see it coming! :D

another big plus for team angst!

lunasky September 13 2007, 02:50:30 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad to hear the twist at the end worked. After reading it over and over, it was all a blur to me by the end.