TEAM ANGST: Flesh and Blood, "The Experiment"

[trobadora]

Title: The Experiment
Author: lunasky ( interview)
Team: Angst
Prompt: Flesh and Blood
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Graphic violence
Summary: They wake up to find themselves in a grey room. A plain, grey room with no windows or doors.

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Comments

[_bettina_]

Wow, this was just fantastic!

[lunasky]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[khyrra]

Wow, really nice twist! Very cool.

[lunasky]

Thanks. Glad to hear it worked. :)

[bironic]

Hee! You went there! I wish I could remember the trigger point -- maybe towards the beginning when they're still wondering about how they can't remember much -- or maybe later -- but at some point as I was reading, I started thinking about doing a story where John and Rodney turned out to be clones and not the real John and Rodney, but they didn't know it, a la Philip K. Dick. And then it came true! And then it kept going! Fabulous.

[lunasky]

Thanks. I'm glad it didn't disappoint :)

[sweeneybird]

This is what the 'Tin Men' episode of SG1 aspired to - you did a brilliant job here, particularly with giving Asurans angst. Well played!

[lunasky]

Thanks! I've never seen that ep--I've only watched SG-1 sporadically, but now I'll have to check it out. I know the idea's not a new one, but I'm glad to hear it worked here :)

[cordeliadelayne]

This was so good. I loved the twist, for once I didn't see it coming at all. Fabulous.

[lunasky]

Thanks. :) I'm glad it wasn't too obvious right from the start.