TEAM ANGST: Shot in the Dark, "Machinery of Night"

[trobadora]

Title: Machinery of Night
Author: lilac_way ( interview)
Team: Angst
Prompt: Shot in the Dark
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: violence, suicidal thoughts
Summary: "Get a grip, John. It was just a nightmare."

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Comments

[ratcreature]

Meeep! This was creepy, and made me feel really anxious for John. Great suspense too.

[lilac_way]

Thank you! I'm glad to know the suspense worked!

[mellyna]

Wonderful story. Suspenseful. Thanks for sharing.

[lilac_way]

Thank you! I worked hard on the suspense building, so I'm glad to know it came across!

[fanficfan]

Effectively chilling. Very satisfying hurt/comfort, woven into a renewing and evolving relationship.

[lilac_way]

Thank you!

[aurora_84]

Woah! This was creepy and intriguing and just amazing. I had a great time reading this story.

[lilac_way]

Thank you -- I'm glad you liked it!

[wildestranger]

Gorgeous. Such a beautiful John.

[lilac_way]

Thank you! (Is there an un-beautiful John out there? The source material is so delicious!)