TEAM PLAY: against the grain, "Operation Play Time for Rodney"

[fluffyllama]

Title: Operation Play Time for Rodney
Author: mikes_grrl
Team: Play
Prompt: against the grain
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: Adult (NC-17)
Warnings: None
Author’s Notes: I was a pinch hitter here, skidding in under the wire and writing like the wind, so if this story is legible (much less enjoyable) that credit goes to my wonderful betas, altyronsmaker and shakespherical. They

Comments

[gottalovev]

I definitely laughed out loud several times! so much fun! the boys being dorks is just a favorite of mine, can't help it!

[mikes_grrl]

The boys being dorks is a fave of mine too! WIN! *high fives*

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[mific]

Hahaha - very fun and great snarky dialogue!

[mikes_grrl]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed the snark - oh boys! ;)

[brasslizard]

Ok - I really, really like this. I love that John tries so hard to help Rodney not think and Rodney just doesn't see it as a problem. The playground analogy works well - it feels very in character for Rodney. Radek is fun here as well.

[mikes_grrl]

Thank you! I'm really glad that Rodney's back story rang true for you, it was something I fretted over. I really appreciate the feedback! <3

[scarlettandblue]

This was such great fun.
Rodney was in perfect form, an adorable blend of arrogance, snark, and grumpy defensive bewilderment, it was a thing of beauty to read.

And John who was not totally clueless to the situation, with his hopeful and yet ultimately doomed plans to make Rodney have fun was really adorable.

I loved how each scene ended with John having to run away in a wave of emarassment, having not actually got the vital clue about Rodney in his usual never saw it coming way until Rodney was right there virtually in his lap.

There were some hilarious laugh out loud moments too, and
Colonel Slinky in his Marvin Martian surf shorts, Rodney's girl crush on John's blushing elf ears, and Swedish lesbian Teflon totally cracked me up. A very enjoyable read. Thank you.

[mikes_grrl]

Thank you for the lovely comment! I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it, and liked how I portrayed Sheppard (which was, I admit, my greatest hurdle with this story).

But lets be honest, who on the expedition doesn't have a girl crush on John's blushing elf ears? Seriously? ;)

Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it!

[londonsabre]

John had never fucked anyone with such a sense of mission behind it. He wanted Rodney; it was not mechanical or heartless. John kissed him and breached him and fucked him like climbing a mountain, slow and steady and careful and dangerous.

OH MY GOODNESS!

[mikes_grrl]

heheh! Glad you, uh, got something out of the story. ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting!