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TEAM PLAY: against the grain, "Operation Play Time for Rodney"

Aug 27, 2010 19:38

Title: Operation Play Time for Rodney
Author: mikes_grrl
Team: Play
Prompt: against the grain
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: Adult (NC-17)
Warnings: None
Author’s Notes: I was a pinch hitter here, skidding in under the wire and writing like the wind, so if this story is legible (much less enjoyable) that credit goes to my wonderful betas, altyronsmaker and shakespherical. They ( Read more... )

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admiralandrea August 27 2010, 19:17:16 UTC

Aw, John, bless! *g* Him trying to find a way to get Rodney to turn off and relax is just so sweet, I loved it! It's really a very John thing, wanting Rodney to be happy and having fun.

I loved Radek calling him "Colonel Slinky" as well *g* Brilliant!

And Inika was hysterical - very funny!

mikes_grrl December 2 2010, 17:03:43 UTC

Thank you! Comedy is not my natural environment so I was really worried about how Inika would sell - I really appreciate the feedback!

And I agree, John really does want to take care of people, even if he's a bit oblivious going about it. :)

hilde August 27 2010, 19:37:04 UTC

I absolutely loved this! And the ending was just perfect :) Thank you!

mikes_grrl December 2 2010, 17:04:03 UTC

Oh thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

snarryfool August 27 2010, 19:48:26 UTC

Utterly delightful and funny. Inika the lesbian Teflon! Rodney's "Uh. So" and drumming his fingers on the desk and blushing could not be more yummy. And soon the piano. This was so much fun, thank you!

mikes_grrl December 2 2010, 17:05:14 UTC

And soon the piano! And yes, I love blushing, uncertain Rodney too - clearly I need help. Or not? heheheh

Thanks for reading and commenting!

danceswithgary August 27 2010, 20:23:10 UTC

I laughed out loud more than once in this - great fun! :-D

mikes_grrl December 2 2010, 17:05:48 UTC

Thank you! Comedy is not my usual genre so I'm really pleased you found it humorous. <3

annas_corner August 27 2010, 20:57:02 UTC

This was a good story, I liked it. The name Inika though, Is that swedish? I am swedish and I've never heard the name.

oceania August 28 2010, 00:04:53 UTC

My SIL's SIL is Swedish and she is named Inika. My husband also works with a Swede named Inika. :-)

annas_corner August 28 2010, 08:46:35 UTC

Oh okay. I liked the way it sounded, but for me it didn't look swedish. But then, maybe its an unusual name? Or I've just never heard it before.

But still, I really liked the story. I was just curious about the name. :)

oceania August 28 2010, 16:04:20 UTC

I loved this story too. She did a great job and I loved the playground stuff!

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