FIC POST: Restless and Breathless, Hotch/Rossi

Apr 05, 2009 19:17

I wanna know where the hell my Sunday went.  Ah well, at least I know what I was doing through most of it, brooding and writing.  Always a winning combination *thumbs up*

Title: Restless and Breathless

Author: Montiese

Category: Angst/Drama/PWP

Pairing: Hotch/Rossi

Rating: MATURE

Summary: “I love you madly but you are horrific at dirty talk.”

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fanfic, criminal minds

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severity_softly April 6 2009, 00:12:38 UTC
EeeeeeeeYAAAAAAAAAY! You wrote slash! You didn't even have to write porn either, and you did!

And here they were. Some days it was like a bad Celine Dion song, others it was perfect.

That line made me giggle so much! <3

“You wanna argue in the middle of the night, Aaron?”

*G* And I can SO hear Dave saying this.

Thank you so much, my dear! YOU ROCK! *squishes you*

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mcgarrygirl78 April 6 2009, 00:41:26 UTC
Well firstly, these two have porn written all over them. I see them both as such sexual beings, and since I felt uncomfortable as a newbie I went to the one place I knew they would be comfortable...in bed.

I am so glad you like it, I actually really like it. And I broke another barrier, at least in this fandom. Woo-hoo!!!!!

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elekanahmen April 6 2009, 01:08:55 UTC
damn!

just

DAMN!

wow

you go girl.

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mcgarrygirl78 April 6 2009, 02:17:01 UTC
*dances happily*

I am honestly thinking about writing more. I dont know, we'll see where it takes me, but I love Hotch and Rossi as characters, and they are kinda sexy. It was an adventure.

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moonflower75 April 10 2009, 22:46:20 UTC
Oh my! I am reduced to a puddle of goo!

I love it, it might be a small scene but it packs a lot, and if you want to write more of this pairing, by all means, please do! :)
love these lines in particular:

"“You're beautiful when you sleep.” Hotch whispered.

“You're beautiful all the time.” Dave murmured."

I consider myself very lucky, because yours is only the second story I read with this pairing and in both cases I enjoyed a great fic written by a very talented author,
thank you so much for sharing

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mcgarrygirl78 April 10 2009, 23:07:43 UTC
I'm glad you like it, they are a new pairing for me so all the kind words are so appreciated. Expect more in the future....I dont know how much more but something surely.

Also, I noticed you friended me. At the moment, I am not adding anyone new to my friends list but any fic posted will be public or easily accessible at bau_inbox.

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moonflower75 April 11 2009, 06:24:20 UTC
No problem, I don't mind if you do not add me, it's your friends' list:you decide who's there and who's not :)

it is basically for me to be able to 'see' if you write anything new...and go read it as promptly as possible because I am very interested :) but if you have a problem with me adding you, please let me know and I will remove you, no hard feelings.

I am pretty new around LJs (and I think it shows clearly :>) and I don't know: shall I send a message asking 'permission' before adding someone to my friends list or not?
Any help on this would be appreciated a lot! :D

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mcgarrygirl78 April 11 2009, 14:02:26 UTC
I did that when I was new. I would comment in their journal or on their story and ask if I could add them. Just adding without them knowing you is weird because there are spambots and all kinds of stuff and people just dont know what the intent is on a strange add.

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stellary July 22 2009, 16:05:30 UTC
because i couldn't pass a Hotch/Rossi fic and not leave a review. yeah.

please write moar. there's a seriously lack of Hotch/Rossi-ness in this universe.

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mcgarrygirl78 July 22 2009, 17:07:23 UTC
I think I have 2 or three more at my writing comm, lairofthemuses. Check them out. I am just a Hotch/Rossi dabbler but I do find them to be a fascinating pairing. Thanks for taking the time to review : )

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linda ext_2068706 November 11 2013, 16:45:37 UTC
hot story. would like more

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