Hele On... Chapter 3

[mcdannomauloa]

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Chapter 3

Po’alua Kakahiaka

Steve knew he’d slept well-he woke up in the same position in which he’d drifted off. He knew Danno had slept well too. He was still in his shirt and

Comments

[oceania]

Okay, so why you keep us hangin girl? I am really enjoying this and want more now. I'm greedy and petulant.

[mcdannomauloa]

I'm a boy. But thanks :-)

[oceania]

Mea culpa. NOw I REALLY CAN't WAIT for the porn. WIll there be porn? I have wanted to read fanfic by a guy for a long time. You, sir, are my first. :)

[mcdannomauloa]

I haven't quite decided on whether there will be porn. I don't think it does a lot for the progression, although "erotica" might be more appropriate. I find porn pretty boring to write because, I mean, face it, I'm a gay man - I kinda know what goes on, and it's not terribly interesting unless you're doing it. I'll see what I can do though :-)

[annabel1984]

Just read this all at once and it's so sweet and promising. Also after looking at your embedded links I am definately saving up the money to go to Hawaii now.

Well Done x

[mcdannomauloa]

Glad you enjoyed the links. I try to add a dash of realism :-)

[americandirrty]

Love this...as always!

[mcdannomauloa]

Mahalos love ;-)