Hele On... Chapter 3

[mcdannomauloa]

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Chapter 3

Po’alua Kakahiaka

Steve knew he’d slept well-he woke up in the same position in which he’d drifted off. He knew Danno had slept well too. He was still in his shirt and

Comments

[gyri]

*grin* Love the early-morning interaction. Looking forward to the next part!

[mcdannomauloa]

It's interesting how fiction rarely portrays early-morning platonic interaction between two straight* (*at least each thinks the other is) men. I try to write something unique =)

[dani_lyn2215]

Hi i hope steve re-evaluates his seduction plan can't wait for the next chapter please update soon

[mcdannomauloa]

I'm sure he'll be forced to make changes. I don't think Steve really has it very well planned out.

[bfive0]

There's a stupid grin on my face right now!!! And that's a lovely necklace!! Can't wait for the next part!!

[mcdannomauloa]

Aren't they cute? You haven't seen the last of them.

[kitmerlot1213]

I love it!

Steve's slowly but surely winning Danny over--personally I think Danny's already fallen for him but he doesn't know how to say it--and Steve's starting to get nervous--adorable :)

[mcdannomauloa]

I was wondering if anybody would catch on to how Steve starts to lose his shit. Ride's not over yet kiddos :-)

[melian_eresseie]

I just finished reading these three chapters one after the other, and all I can say right now is please, don't let me wait too long for the next one! ♥ your story, and your writing style is great!

[mcdannomauloa]

Grazie! I really appreciate your feedback.