Corner of Your Eye (13/14)

[maychorian]

Fandom: Supernatural/Stargate SG-1
Title: Corner of Your Eye
Author: Maychorian
Characters: Jack O'Neill, Dean Winchester
Category: Action/Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Gen, Crossover, Angst
Rating: T/PG-13
Spoilers: Pilot for SPN, up to Season 9 for SG-1
Summary: Jack O'Neill is not very good at being retired. Dean Winchester is not very good

Comments

[lita_of_jupiter]

You are so evil... Poor Susanah and Poor Dean so broken... and Jack trying to mend the pieces for a little while!

[maychorian]

Yes, here is where you see me bring on the angst. :) Jack has done this kind of thing before. He's very good at it.

[lita_of_jupiter]

at least he is there, had Dean been alone...

*sniffs*

[maychorian]

Yeah, that would have been bad.

[lil_jei]

"Susanna blinked sadly, and nodded. Then she leaned in and kissed Jack’s cheek, shyly, a young girl saying good-night to a father.".....My favorite line in the whole fic so far. I loved the imagery. And I really love your Jack---he's rugged and sweet. Much love.

[maychorian]

I'm glad you liked that. It just goes to show that Jack is so awesome, even hundred-fifty-year-old ghosts can look up to him like a father figure. :)

[maychorian]

Thank you! I'm glad that the emotions came across clearly. It's always a bit of a toss-up, describing non-physical things.

[plratty]

Truly wonderful daddy O'Neill
You do realize that you will never be able to stop this universe. These two hold tight to those they consider family and after this espisode they would never abadnon each other.

[maychorian]

Very true. Jack and Dean are very alike in their devotion to the people they care about. And it's pretty clear that they feel this way about each other, now. :) It makes me all kinds of happy.

[plratty]

I know it is your story but I imagine all sorts of wonderful scenes when time catch up with SN series. For example, Jack finding out that Dean is suposed dead and serial killer with the news of the shapeshifter. You know how he got by the end with Danial ascending. I can see a pissed Jack turing up and a very confused Sam.
Any way I am just happy to read what you are willing to write. This universe is just fun

[maychorian]

Oh, trust me, I have all kinds of ideas for how Jack will interact with the SPN canon. This story is, like, an introduction to what could turn out to be a whole slew of one-shots and short fics and longer ones. I want to bring Sam into it, of course. And Jack and John interaction would be really interesting and maybe a little scary, and I just... yeah. So many ideas.

[ancientcitadel]

Oh, I do love your Jack. Now he has to comfort another kiddie. :)

[maychorian]

Jack is good at that. :D Thanks!