Whisper Down a String

[maychorian]

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Whisper Down a String
Author: Maychorian
Characters: Dean, Sam, John, Bobby
Category: Gen, Weechester, Drama, touch of H/C
Rating: PG
Warning: ( skip) Schmoop.
Spoilers: None
Summary: Uncle Bobby's place is awesome, and Sammy is totally a little bitch for preferring to read his book instead of playing in the attic

Comments

[willow_fae_20]

Your Dean here is just like my older sister was when we were younger. She bugged and bothered me until I got so mad that I stomped away and broke the keys on the piano she wanted me to play.

Anyways; this was a great atmospheric piece. The creepy factor was just subtle enough to crawl under the skin and wait there.

[maychorian]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story. I love writing SamnDean as kids because I can use my own experience. :D

[marinarusalka]

That was great. Such a spooky little ghost story, with adorable young Sam and Dean voices. John was lovely here too, "grounding" the boys to take care of them. Very nice.

[maychorian]

I'm so glad you liked the voices. And I'm very fond of John in this story, thanks!

[faradheia]

WOW!! Creepy and lovely and wonderful all at once - gave me the shivers!

Really fantastic job!!

[maychorian]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it, and that it gave you the shivers. :D

[tehjessica]

Creepy and awesome, just the way I love it! :D I loved Dean's way of getting Sam's attention, I should try it on my 21 year old younger brother! ;)

[maychorian]

hee, glad to pass along techniques for annoying siblings. :D Thank you!

[debbiel66]

This is just an *awesome* idea for a story. Beautifully written and creepy as hell, but only in the best way. I don't know if I'm getting overly emotional or what, but I got teary for Bobby. Loved Sammy getting punished by taking away his book -- I can *so* relate! Thank you.

[maychorian]

Aw, I felt really bad for Bobby, too. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.