Fic: Back to the Beginning

[maxinegray]

Title: Back to the Beginning
Author: Maxinegray
Characters: Mohinder, Sylar
Pairing: Mylar
Rating: PG 13
Warnings: Sylar is Sylar.
Spoilers: The finale of S3
Summary/Prompt: A sequel to ‘ Where the Story Begins Again’, Sylar has a sit down with Mohinder. 
Word Count: 1,380
A/N: Thanks to bennetluvr  for looking this over for mistakes! Still haven’t seen the

Comments

[mabetini]

You like it when I'm bossy!!!

:D

And I loooooooooooooove this story! MAKE HIM BEG! >D

[maxinegray]

Ninja mabes! Super fast comment.. XDD

LOL.. I'll make him beg.. if only for you. Just gearing up for the good stuff!

<333

[dref22]

It's been a long time since I read a Mylar fic. I read this and I'm glad I did! This is my kind of thing, I loved it!

[maxinegray]

Aw, yay! I feel loved... You should read the real kinky stuff... It's hot!

Thanks for reading!!

[alicambs]

Poor, poor Mohinder. It really doesn't help that he suffers so beautifully either!
Glad you're continuing.

[maxinegray]

Oh I know.. so pretty.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[levitatethis]

This is too exciting! I'm glad you have plans to continue but if you didn't I'd be insisting right now...actually, making demands is more likely.

I really like the dark tone to this piece and how you still manage to convey the intensity and depth of the Mohinder/Sylar relationship while still keeping them on opposite sides (with all that grey area in between). You do a nice job of getting the verbal back and forth that makes their conversations so fascinating to listen to -- they know what to say to rankle the other one's nerves, they know what hurts, and what connects to intellectual side. They walk this line between emotional and mental and here you've brought those both out. As you can see this kind of storytelling gets me very excited for the possibilities of where you can take it.

Can't wait!

[maxinegray]

lol hmm I do accept accept bribes to help get the next chapter out sooner ;)

Thanks so much for the great comment once again!!

[bennetluvr]

Love it! I love even more that I get to read it first. *evil laugh*

You already know I'm not a big slash fan, but your scenarios between them are so realistic that it's easy to enjoy. I can't wait for the next part!

[maxinegray]

*pats* You're special.. heh. Verrrrry special.

It's not so much slash as it real.. After all Parasite happened. ;)