Fic: Back to the Beginning

[maxinegray]

Title: Back to the Beginning
Author: Maxinegray
Characters: Mohinder, Sylar
Pairing: Mylar
Rating: PG 13
Warnings: Sylar is Sylar.
Spoilers: The finale of S3
Summary/Prompt: A sequel to ‘ Where the Story Begins Again’, Sylar has a sit down with Mohinder. 
Word Count: 1,380
A/N: Thanks to bennetluvr  for looking this over for mistakes! Still haven’t seen the

Comments

[themadbutterfly]

^^ Omg! I love this story! hey! its really truly my birthday this monday! can i have a present ^^? a new chapter ^_________^ plllllleeease! haha or you know...sometime next week...or sometime this month. whenever you can ^^ I love this plot you have going and just anything with Sylar tormenting Mohinder.

[maxinegray]

Happy Birthdaaaaay!!

I'll work extra hard on that chapter just for you!

And Sylar tormenting Mohinder is also one of my fav plotlines ever!!

Thanks for commenting!

[starrdust411]

Yay! I totally forgot about this story, but I'm glad you're continuing.

I have to say, I was really confused about what power Sylar was using. It took me a while to figure out that it was from that guy in I Am Sylar, the one played by Ron Howard's brother, right?

Poor Mohinder, being forced to be tortured by Sylar. I hope Sylar doesn't hurt him too much. Momo's been through a lot these past couple of volumes. Although I have to say your characterizations are spot on, especially the way Mohinder stubbornly sticks to his guns and how Sylar tries so hard to talk his way into getting what he wants. I can't wait to see how this plays out.

[maxinegray]

I believe so.. truthfully I've only heard about the power second hand so I was going off what I heard.

I can't promise Sylar won't hurt Mo too much.. Mohinder is quite stubborn.

Thanks for commenting!!

[revica1]

I must say beautifully written! I truly love this fanfiction because they are both so VERY in-character! It makes the whole thing plausable and I can't tell you enough how much I appreciate and love that! In fact I can see this playing out on the show... Hmmm.. LOL So please keep writing! I'd love to see the next chapter! (also, the section with the verbal sparring match is spot on! XD)

[maxinegray]

Aw thank you so much!! I was trying so hard to get them in character..

And if only we got a Mylar reunion like this on the show. I would die of happiness... and actually go back to watching the show. XD

I'm plotting out the new chapter now! And thank you so much for the comment once again!

[eternal_moonie]

AWESOME!!!!! Totally love this fic!

[maxinegray]

Thank you!!! :)

[lastcutebender]

Your characterization is really good. I can practically hear them in my head and that doesn't happen often for me.

Great story and keep up the good work!!!

[maxinegray]

Thank You so much!! You have no idea what that means for me!!

:)