Fic: Eyes on Fire

[maxinegray]

Title: Eyes on Fire
Author: MaxineGray
Characters: Mohinder/Sylar, brief appearance of Peter, Nathan, Bennet and Matt
Rating: PG - 13
Summary: Sylar stalks Mohinder. Sylar kidnaps Mohinder. This is set in a non-season 3 verse.

Word Count: 1,900 (aprox)

Warnings: kidnapping

Comments

[takhallus]

I really like what you did at the end there!

[maxinegray]

Thank you!!

[levitatethis]

This is a very interesting concept and I like how you played with it. Besides the fact that you did a really nice job of expanding on the characters as we know them (Mohinder's irritation with Sylar just showing up, moving beyond the fear he used to feel initially) I really love the idea of Sylar showing up at Mohinder's without a real plan in place. For some reason this connects with me in the vein of Mohinder as Sylar's weakness, his Achilles Heel, his blindspot. He almost can't help himself from seeking Mohinder out, seeking how he's doing, making sure to remind him how intertwined they really are

[maxinegray]

Oh wow huge comment...

You must be the famous Levitatethis with their big ass comments. XD

And even though Sylar may look like he plans all his naughty stuff I know half of what he does is him just winging it. ;)

I love disturbing/odd endings... and I tried to make it as cheerful as I could... but I think it escaped me. Oh well. XD.

Thank you for reading!!

[blossommorphine]

This was disturbing, thoughtful, and touching. Having Sylar make him invisible only to himself, instead of merely keeping him locked up in a room, tied to a bed, indicates how much Sylar really desires to be with him, making it all the more disturbing. This was a great story.

[maxinegray]

*snerk*

Disturbing seems to fit this well it seems.

And thank you so much for reading!

[mabetini]

MAAAAAAAAAAXXXX *GLOMP* That was SO freaking amazing!!! I'm actually a little teary eyed right now because its such a beautiful idea!

Sylar grins like someone who just figured out the answer to a lottery winning question. “How to make you stay with me forever.”

That gave me CHILLS like you wouldn't believe. Guh you are such a sweetheart....thank you so much!

*REREADS*

[maxinegray]

You're welcome Mabes!! *is glomped*

I'm always bugging you for more cause I absolutely love your stuff but then sometimes life can really suck so I decided its time to pay you back for everything!!

And it got a reread?!! Squee! Yay!

Does this mean it's mabes approved?!

[mabetini]

You got THREE rereads!!! <3!!!

Mabes approved like WOAH!!!! You are too sweet!

Thank you again!!!!!

[megmatthews20]

A ghost...of sorts? But, but, he's not dead, right??? Just a ghost to everyone else, yes?? *rereads* Okay. Sylar said he's not gonna kill him. *wipes brow*

That's pretty twisted, and very awesome. There are so many things I love, the obvious being Sylar knocking Mohinder out, kidnapping him, and tying him up. I also love the creative way he keeps Mohinder all to himself. It'd be downright frightening if one were in Mohinder's position, but it's a really genius idea if one is in Sylar's position.

And I love love love that Mohinder is scared, but still strong, and still defiant.

This was great!

cheers!

[maxinegray]

Hahaha no. He's not dead... dead!Mohinder makes me bawl like a baby. So I could never do that to anyone. And he's like a ghost to everyone but Sylar.

*shrugs* And Sylar does have the power to turn him back... but that would mean sharing him with others... and Sylar can't have that :P

Yea defiant/tied up/kidnapped Mohinder is one of my favorites...would've included drugging but I couldn't really fit that in.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! You have no idea what it means to me. :)