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Jan 11, 2005 20:12

Well, after some re-reading and feedback from others, my conclusion on my poem in the previous entry is that its pretty good, but it doesn't come to life enough. Its a poem of words, not emotions, so to speak. As in, its pretty good, but it isn't great. Oh well, I'm too lazy to revise and the poetry convention is sounding more and more like a ( Read more... )

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Karate Person...* pink11ice January 15 2005, 21:17:35 UTC
Welp, at least u can make money doin' somethin you like! lmao. I do registers...woopie-ti-doo lmao..but it pays.

I enjoyed ur poem, but i didn't really get a picture. I mean u could but u couldn't. Idk my mind hurts too much to realize what i'm sayin' so I better go.

Karate^_^ lol. haha dont mind me..

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Re: Karate Person...* maverick_ace January 16 2005, 17:12:37 UTC
what's your karate connection?

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I'm so here...* pink11ice January 16 2005, 18:26:19 UTC
Nothing, I just like Karate cuz it starts with a "K" no idk. I just felt like sayin' Karate Person..lol. Is that a problem, Alex? yeah i thought not. j/m lmao

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