Well, after some re-reading and feedback from others, my conclusion on my poem in the previous entry is that its pretty good, but it doesn't come to life enough. Its a poem of words, not emotions, so to speak. As in, its pretty good, but it isn't great. Oh well, I'm too lazy to revise and the poetry convention is sounding more and more like a
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I enjoyed ur poem, but i didn't really get a picture. I mean u could but u couldn't. Idk my mind hurts too much to realize what i'm sayin' so I better go.
Karate^_^ lol. haha dont mind me..
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