Jan 11, 2005 20:12
Well, after some re-reading and feedback from others, my conclusion on my poem in the previous entry is that its pretty good, but it doesn't come to life enough. Its a poem of words, not emotions, so to speak. As in, its pretty good, but it isn't great. Oh well, I'm too lazy to revise and the poetry convention is sounding more and more like a way to take my money, lol.
Updates, last night at karate, I finished the 3rd bo kata!!! It was only my 3rd class learning it, lol. Played poker saturday night, kicked ass in the marines push up challenge at school today.
Oh, and I've just loosened up a bit in general. Feels good. More rest, more confidence. And i've found some good college info. That about sums up this quick little update. I'm outta here ppl! Cya!!