Fic: Archenemies (Sherlock, spoilers for 2x03 Reichenbach Fall)

[maverick4oz]

Here's a wee ficlet in the 221B format (221 words, with the last ending in B) which will probably morph into a larger story in the near future.

Title: Archenemies
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: John, Mycroft
Warnings: none
Spoilers: 2x03, The Reichenbach Fall.
Summary: Mycroft would be wise to remember...
Disclaimer: Sadly, not my sandbox.

Comments

[pollitt]

I *adore* John's anger and his pain, it's so very raw and beautiful. Poor Mycroft (to a point) not being able to feel that depth of love.

Beautiful.

[catheights]

I just finished watching the episode, and this is so the additional scene I wanted to see. I feel John's pain coming through in what you wrote. Beautifully done!

[swissmarg]

Ooh yes. John is so much smex when he gets defensively aggressive like this. *love*

[pony_rocks]

Great!

[adhyra_19]

"I learned from the best.”

Wow, this truly captures all the passion that John carries inside, now transformed into pain because of his loss... this was such a great epilogue to what we saw in the screen.
That last line was superb, kudos :)