There, fixed.

[master_of_purr]

I´ve just fixed/modified one of my most successful short stories -succesful as in a handle of readers took the trouble to commnent it, bur the good thing is that they are themselves good writers and avid fans. so i was kinda happy. but perfection never´s there, so i rewrote the first part of the climax. on the first version certain events were not

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i dont know how send you an image

[diormood]

nada de malediscencia ici. its nice. a vrai autor you have become.

im late

[diormood]

i post the image youll see it anyway.

a brutus moment

[diormood]

i send the image by gmail. brutus. thats me.