That's okay. I haven't read the books and am only a couple of comics into the series that focuses on everyone's backstories. The timeframe makes sense, and that's what I figured. No worries about deviating!
BTW, I really liked how easily Jack broke down. She's tough, but I feel like she's... brittle. Easily cracked when forced to endure a repeat of anything remotely Pragia-like. I can't wait until she can cry and swear into Miranda's chest while getting backrubs. :') Or whatever, lol. I'm sure you'll have some amazing hurt comfort and it'll be great.
[Fill] Suck it up, Cheerleader (10/?)
anonymous
October 16 2015, 16:07:01 UTC
Miranda suffered through her next session. Her production, like Kelly's, was increasing. She had never resented the dildo more, she hated being penetrated, being milked, being tortured. She clenched her fists, grasping at air. More than anything, she hated how she was getting used to it. The dildo forced her to a brittle orgasm, the flush of heat indistinguishable from her anger. She gave no outward sign other than flaring her nostrils
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[Fill] Suck it up, Cheerleader (12/?)
anonymous
October 18 2015, 14:58:19 UTC
Miranda saw what Jack had noticed. Kelly was getting accustomed to her predicament. She would be rationalising, bargaining. If she could produce enough milk, she would be allowed to live. She might be a prisoner, but it could be worse
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RE: [Fill] Suck it up, Cheerleader (13/?)
anonymous
October 18 2015, 18:50:39 UTC
Another great chapter! Thanks so much! I can't wait to see what happens. Is anyone else going to be showing up? Also I'm still fuzzy on why they grabbed Kelly. Was that explained already?
Re: [Fill] Suck it up, Cheerleader (13/?)
anonymous
October 18 2015, 19:06:04 UTC
Hey thanks! Glad it's still hitting the spot. This is probably the most ambitious fic I've tried to write (i.e. greatest plot to porn ratio yet), so by all means, let loose with the con-crit if there's somewhere I can do better.
I guess I glossed over what Kelly's doing there, I figured she was on the run from Cerberus with Miranda and got scooped up at the same time. That was mentioned briefly in chapter 2. Why they were hanging together? I'll work that in later if I can.
As for how it continues, this fic is currently under construction, and I will absolutely not be ruining any of the surprises in case I can figure out even bigger ones. Although there will be more graphic descriptions of bondage, torture and milking to come. With any luck.
Hope everything's still in order at your end. Updates in a couple of days, I hope.
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anonymous
October 19 2015, 11:55:07 UTC
Ooh, I'm looking forward to it! And I don't really have any concrit, although I much prefer Jack and Miranda snarking at each other rather than using pet names like "my love" lol. Nothing wrong with it, I just love the pairing exactly because when they get each other alone they still fight and call each other mean names, e.g. the Citadel party. But that's purely a personal preference haha.
On my end, I'm still pumping 6-8 times a day and taking a ton of pills! This process gets expensive fast. No milk yet, but it'll probably be another two weeks until that happens since I've never lactated before. I'm getting super antsy about it, too. My nipples itch like crazy.
Re: Re: [Fill] Suck it up, Cheerleader (13/?)
anonymous
October 19 2015, 18:50:50 UTC
My own personal headcanon is that their snark is reserved for the good times, but when shit gets serious they go all gooey. But I shall be as accommodating as I can... :)
Two more weeks! You're more than half-way, then? Fingers crossed, that is.
Re: [Fill] Suck it up, Cheerleader (13/?)
anonymous
October 19 2015, 19:08:06 UTC
Hopefully a bit over halfway. It'll be 4 weeks on Thursday, and most first-timers seem to notice drops during week 5. I'm crossing my fingers too. Come on, boobs! I believe in you!
[Fill] Suck it up, Cheerleader (14/?)
anonymous
October 19 2015, 18:52:26 UTC
Chapter 5
“Oh, heck no! Needles? Ahhhhhhhhhhh... F...F...Fudge!” screamed Kasumi. “Fudging fuuuuuudge!” She drew her tattooed lower lip into her mouth and bit down, but yelps and yips continued to escape from the corners of her mouth as the needles penetrated the base of her nipples and the electrical stimulation began. She tilted her head back, the muscles of her neck standing out to reveal her humming pulse, visible from across the room. Miranda exchanged glances with Jack and Kelly, and saw them realise at the same time. Kasumi wasn't screaming from the pain. She was coming hard, and with some gusto
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BTW, I really liked how easily Jack broke down. She's tough, but I feel like she's... brittle. Easily cracked when forced to endure a repeat of anything remotely Pragia-like. I can't wait until she can cry and swear into Miranda's chest while getting backrubs. :') Or whatever, lol. I'm sure you'll have some amazing hurt comfort and it'll be great.
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I guess I glossed over what Kelly's doing there, I figured she was on the run from Cerberus with Miranda and got scooped up at the same time. That was mentioned briefly in chapter 2. Why they were hanging together? I'll work that in later if I can.
As for how it continues, this fic is currently under construction, and I will absolutely not be ruining any of the surprises in case I can figure out even bigger ones. Although there will be more graphic descriptions of bondage, torture and milking to come. With any luck.
Hope everything's still in order at your end. Updates in a couple of days, I hope.
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On my end, I'm still pumping 6-8 times a day and taking a ton of pills! This process gets expensive fast. No milk yet, but it'll probably be another two weeks until that happens since I've never lactated before. I'm getting super antsy about it, too. My nipples itch like crazy.
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Two more weeks! You're more than half-way, then? Fingers crossed, that is.
Another chunk coming your way momentarily.
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Wow. It is fun to say weird shit on the internet.
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“Oh, heck no! Needles? Ahhhhhhhhhhh... F...F...Fudge!” screamed Kasumi. “Fudging fuuuuuudge!” She drew her tattooed lower lip into her mouth and bit down, but yelps and yips continued to escape from the corners of her mouth as the needles penetrated the base of her nipples and the electrical stimulation began. She tilted her head back, the muscles of her neck standing out to reveal her humming pulse, visible from across the room. Miranda exchanged glances with Jack and Kelly, and saw them realise at the same time. Kasumi wasn't screaming from the pain. She was coming hard, and with some gusto ( ... )
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