Re: Almost Doesn't Count 4C/?
anonymous
January 19 2014, 21:21:45 UTC
Oh poor Nihlus and Saren. Saren is trying so hard to work through his issues and I wonder if Nihlus realizes how hard he is trying. Ugh, I love this even as I feel bad for them.
Almost Doesn't Count 5A/?
anonymous
January 20 2014, 19:01:16 UTC
A!A Note: So this is probably the last daily update for a bit. Can I just say that writing Kuril was hard? In game he’s all cordial, polite and well-spoken…until he tries to capture Shepard and then BOOM! He’s an asshole
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Re: Almost Doesn't Count 5B/?
anonymous
January 20 2014, 20:14:39 UTC
Faithful commenter, I’m writing non-stop, and then editing and having it beta-read and then editing again. Takes a bit of time but it shouldn’t be more than a day or two.
Re: Almost Doesn't Count 5B/?
anonymous
January 20 2014, 20:17:49 UTC
Oh, I wasn't trying to be pushy. I totally understand the time it takes. I just wanted you to know how much I am enjoying this! So take all the time you need!
Re: Almost Doesn't Count 5B/?
anonymous
January 20 2014, 20:27:29 UTC
Ha, I know you weren't. I just feel bad when I can't keep my self-imposed schedual. But I only just finished Part6A this morning and I refuse to post only a piece of a "chapter" because chances are I still need to make changes. Plus this plot I've got planned still needs, well, more planning. And I'm super glad you like it, absolutely makes my day.
Almost Doesn't Count 6A/?
anonymous
January 22 2014, 08:18:17 UTC
A!A: Starting Part 7 tomorrow.
Part 6 A
The following morning Saren cornered Vido in his hotel suite. The sun had barely risen and the human was still sleeping, though not alone; there was an asari lying loose-limbed across his chest. She was aware of him long before Vido was, snapping awake the very second Saren positioned himself at the foot of the bed. Good instincts for a maiden, he let her go.
Saren surveyed the room. The human’s weapons and armor were too far out of reach to be used against him. Lifting his foot, he slammed it into the bedframe, effectively starling Vido into wakefulness.
“Good morning.” Saren deadpanned.
To his credit, the human recovered from the shock quickly. “Well this is a new spin on room service.” He quipped.
He pulled the pistol from the slot on his thigh casually and silently.
Vido let out a noise of absolute frustration. “What do you want?” Even without the multiple tenors and harmonics of a turian’s voice, the human’s tone was perfectly clear. You’re not worth my time.Arrogant species. It
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Re: Almost Doesn't Count 6C/?
anonymous
January 22 2014, 13:16:38 UTC
Oh interesting twist with Kuril! I didn't see it ending well for Kuril no matter what. Saren, you dolt, you told the wrong guy! But at least he managed to say it out loud, it's a start. Enjoyed the update, looking forward to the next!
Re: Almost Doesn't Count 6C/?
anonymous
January 22 2014, 17:11:38 UTC
I knew Kuril's background, but didn't put it together so I guess you weren't that obvious. heh I'm glad that was a bit of a breakthrough for Saren as well!
Re: Almost Doesn't Count 6C/?
anonymous
January 22 2014, 18:30:24 UTC
A!A Yay! Progress writing something other than smut! But all joking aside, that's good. I mean cannon is that turians are very group over the individual oriented and yes Kuril's idea for Purgatory reflected that but I still felt like he needed something to push him to what was essentially going against the Hierarchy. And we all do crazy shit for family.
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I'm sure Nihlus at least has an inkling if not the whole picture.
Up next I start in on the plot and currently I'm only one section ahead of that.
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And I'm super glad you like it, absolutely makes my day.
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Part 6 A
The following morning Saren cornered Vido in his hotel suite. The sun had barely risen and the human was still sleeping, though not alone; there was an asari lying loose-limbed across his chest. She was aware of him long before Vido was, snapping awake the very second Saren positioned himself at the foot of the bed. Good instincts for a maiden, he let her go.
Saren surveyed the room. The human’s weapons and armor were too far out of reach to be used against him. Lifting his foot, he slammed it into the bedframe, effectively starling Vido into wakefulness.
“Good morning.” Saren deadpanned.
To his credit, the human recovered from the shock quickly. “Well this is a new spin on room service.” He quipped.
He pulled the pistol from the slot on his thigh casually and silently.
Vido let out a noise of absolute frustration. “What do you want?” Even without the multiple tenors and harmonics of a turian’s voice, the human’s tone was perfectly clear. You’re not worth my time.Arrogant species. It ( ... )
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And yes, finally saying those words is a big step for Saren, hopefully he can take some more.
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But all joking aside, that's good. I mean cannon is that turians are very group over the individual oriented and yes Kuril's idea for Purgatory reflected that but I still felt like he needed something to push him to what was essentially going against the Hierarchy. And we all do crazy shit for family.
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