False Idol 7/?
anonymous
June 28 2012, 00:53:23 UTC
. Then he was moaning, the tickle turned into pleasure, the rough rasp of Shepard's stubbled upper lip and chin almost torturous against his chest. Shepard's fingers found his cock again and James was fucking himself hard into Shepard's fist, getting closer and closer until he was trembling, on the verge of coming, and then Shepard let go of him, left him fucking the air and his chest bare and cold and left him begging
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Re: False Idol 10/?
anonymous
July 1 2012, 04:04:22 UTC
Author anon here! Thanks so much, I'm thrilled that people are actually liking this! It's actually not very typical of what I normally write, I'm afraid, and it's the first kinkmeme fill I've done in months. I usually write femShep/Garrus though I have gotten into Cortez/Vega recently.
Re: False Idol 10/?
anonymous
July 1 2012, 04:55:00 UTC
You write slash so well! Really hoping you'll decide to do more when this amazing story is done. Personally, I'd love to see you try an M!Shenko story sometime, assuming you're a fan of the pairing. :D
Which Who Wrote What post is yours? You linked to the mod post :P
Re: False Idol 10/?
anonymous
July 1 2012, 18:48:53 UTC
Thank you so much! I do enjoy slash and with most other fandoms write more slash than anything else, but for whatever reason with ME I actually love a het pairing the most! My slash tendencies with ME seem more Vega-focused than anything else. I just have this insane love of seeing Vega squirm and/or being an eager bottom. Unf.
Ugh, sorry for the idiocy, that's what I get for replying while half asleep.
Re: False Idol 10/?
anonymous
July 2 2012, 01:43:05 UTC
OP is so in love with you... ♥ Like the above Anon said, kudos for Rider too. I read it forever ago, amazing story. Just wondering though, is this Shepard the same M!Shep from Rider?
And this story! Utterly perfect fill for my prompt. Just perfect. Do you think it's possible we could see a sequel for this? Because I love a squirmy/eager!bottom!Vega too. I mean, I can just imagine him awkwardly approaching Shepard later, consciously unsure why he wants it, but his body practically begging for Shepard to fuck him again. :P
Re: False Idol 10/?
anonymous
July 3 2012, 05:17:46 UTC
Thanks OP! and glad to hear you like Rider too. No, I don't think this is the same M!Shep... the one in Rider was more paragade whereas this Shep is 100% renegade.
You liking the story is the most important thing to me! I really hope you like the rest of it... I've been making myself all nervous and worried about it since the first half went off pretty well!
Since I put so much effort into this fill I think I will end up posting it to AO3 after cleaning it up a little, so if there's anything you don't like or want changed, let me know and I will fix it on the AO3 version.
As for a sequel, I'm debating it! I'm never much good with sequels, but I would be interested in writing Vega going back for more. Though I am still craving some toppy Cortez and he would probably insinuate himself into any sequel I write now so maybe not... *laughs*
Re: False Idol 10/?
anonymous
July 3 2012, 06:40:36 UTC
Believe me, this story was just perfect! I mean perfect, I couldn't have asked for a better fill for my prompt, I don't believe it could be done! Other than fixing typos and the like (though I didn't notice any), this story couldn't be better. However, this story is yours, so if there is something you personally want to change don't hesitate to do so. Just let me know if you do and I'll reread the story on A03 with the changes, and I'll still love it ;)
One idea for a sequel is you could write a story/series about Vega slowly realizing this relationship with Renegade!Shep, while the sex is mega hot, isn't good for him. And you could make him slowly build something more "real" with Cortez (who can totally show him a more meaningful side to being topped like there's no tomorrow). I'm sure Renegade!Shep has enough sexslave!Kaidan to be content with letting Vega go. I ship Cortez/Vega and M!Shep/Kaidan more than M!Shep/Vega anyway, so Cortez hooking up with Vega would be amazing. xD
And if you feel like de-anon-ing feel free to let me know via PM on AO3 if you have an AO3 account or other alias and I'd *love* to dedicate the fic to you--your prompt was brilliant and hot. But absolutely no pressure.
Oh mannn, I'm so tempted to do that. I think I need a brief break, but I've got some ideas already. Cortez/Vega is pretty much my main m/m ship in ME3.
False Idol 11/15
anonymous
July 3 2012, 04:56:20 UTC
(A/N: You guys have been so nice to me, I truly hope this last section doesn't disappoint. Forgive my terrible internets Spanish--I will gladly take corrections.)James grinned up at Shepard. "Thought you said I was the good one
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False Idol 12/15
anonymous
July 3 2012, 04:59:05 UTC
"Oh God… Commander… Please."
"Not good enough."
Releasing him, Shepard stood. James made a strangled noise of protest that Shepard utterly ignored. He loomed over James as he pushed his trousers the rest of the way off, then stripped his top off. He was a good-looking man, scars and all
( ... )
False Idol 13/15
anonymous
July 3 2012, 05:00:53 UTC
"And you said you didn't want this." Shepard was almost purring. "Now listen to you. You sound like a sweet little whore. Is this what you want, James?" Shepard pulled back, rubbing himself against James' entrance. "My cock inside you? Filling you up, stretching your virgin ass open? Claiming you all for myself?"
James was beyond words, nodding mutely while his breath came out in sharp, desperate gasps.
"Then tell me, James. Beg me."
James face burned. It was easier to say in Spanish, when he knew Kaidan, at least, couldn't understand. Shepard moved again, circling tip of his cock harder against James' asshole, sliding and teasing. James vibrated, everything inside him strained and taut, waiting to snap. He had never felt like this before, so out of control, so hungry for someone. Never wanted anything as badly as he wanted Shepard right now, Shepard inside him, on him, fucking him, taking him, using him
( ... )
False Idol 14/15
anonymous
July 3 2012, 05:02:40 UTC
James moaned, reduced to incoherence, spreading his thighs apart further, raising his ass to give Shepard better access as he moved back to meet him. Shepard picked up his pace, thrusting harder, faster. James' breathing turned ragged, short fast gasps punctuated with grunts as Shepard pounded into him. The grunts became words, became: "Please, Shepard, please, please, please, Shepard, please…"
"Please what?" Shepard dragged teeth over the knob of his spine. James knew Shepard knew the answer, knew that he would have to say it anyway.
"Please let me come. Oh god, Shepard. I need… I need to come. Please let me."
In answer, Shepard rammed into him harder, drove him until he was hoarse from screaming Shepard's name. Then Shepard's hand curled around his cock and he almost wept with the pleasure of it. "There's a good boy," Shepard purred. His tongue traced a hot trail along the curve of James' ear, his voice lowering to a husky, imperative whisper. " Vente, lieutenant
( ... )
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I have an old very incomplete Who Wrote What thread here:
http://masseffectkink.livejournal.com/1511.html?thread=28903#t28903
and an AO3 account I might link to if I decide to clean this fic up and post it there and de-anon after it's done, but not so sure about that. ^_^;;
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Which Who Wrote What post is yours? You linked to the mod post :P
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Ugh, sorry for the idiocy, that's what I get for replying while half asleep.
http://masseffectkink.livejournal.com/1511.html?thread=3653863#t3653863
The last parts of False Idol should be done tonight. I hope!
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And this story! Utterly perfect fill for my prompt. Just perfect. Do you think it's possible we could see a sequel for this? Because I love a squirmy/eager!bottom!Vega too. I mean, I can just imagine him awkwardly approaching Shepard later, consciously unsure why he wants it, but his body practically begging for Shepard to fuck him again. :P
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You liking the story is the most important thing to me! I really hope you like the rest of it... I've been making myself all nervous and worried about it since the first half went off pretty well!
Since I put so much effort into this fill I think I will end up posting it to AO3 after cleaning it up a little, so if there's anything you don't like or want changed, let me know and I will fix it on the AO3 version.
As for a sequel, I'm debating it! I'm never much good with sequels, but I would be interested in writing Vega going back for more. Though I am still craving some toppy Cortez and he would probably insinuate himself into any sequel I write now so maybe not... *laughs*
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One idea for a sequel is you could write a story/series about Vega slowly realizing this relationship with Renegade!Shep, while the sex is mega hot, isn't good for him. And you could make him slowly build something more "real" with Cortez (who can totally show him a more meaningful side to being topped like there's no tomorrow). I'm sure Renegade!Shep has enough sexslave!Kaidan to be content with letting Vega go. I ship Cortez/Vega and M!Shep/Kaidan more than M!Shep/Vega anyway, so Cortez hooking up with Vega would be amazing. xD
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http://archiveofourown.org/works/450512
And if you feel like de-anon-ing feel free to let me know via PM on AO3 if you have an AO3 account or other alias and I'd *love* to dedicate the fic to you--your prompt was brilliant and hot. But absolutely no pressure.
Oh mannn, I'm so tempted to do that. I think I need a brief break, but I've got some ideas already. Cortez/Vega is pretty much my main m/m ship in ME3.
Thank you again!!
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"Not good enough."
Releasing him, Shepard stood. James made a strangled noise of protest that Shepard utterly ignored. He loomed over James as he pushed his trousers the rest of the way off, then stripped his top off. He was a good-looking man, scars and all ( ... )
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James was beyond words, nodding mutely while his breath came out in sharp, desperate gasps.
"Then tell me, James. Beg me."
James face burned. It was easier to say in Spanish, when he knew Kaidan, at least, couldn't understand. Shepard moved again, circling tip of his cock harder against James' asshole, sliding and teasing. James vibrated, everything inside him strained and taut, waiting to snap. He had never felt like this before, so out of control, so hungry for someone. Never wanted anything as badly as he wanted Shepard right now, Shepard inside him, on him, fucking him, taking him, using him ( ... )
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"Please what?" Shepard dragged teeth over the knob of his spine. James knew Shepard knew the answer, knew that he would have to say it anyway.
"Please let me come. Oh god, Shepard. I need… I need to come. Please let me."
In answer, Shepard rammed into him harder, drove him until he was hoarse from screaming Shepard's name. Then Shepard's hand curled around his cock and he almost wept with the pleasure of it. "There's a good boy," Shepard purred. His tongue traced a hot trail along the curve of James' ear, his voice lowering to a husky, imperative whisper. " Vente, lieutenant ( ... )
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