If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 12 2011, 04:24:55 UTC
Some wise person once said ‘The reward for a job well done is more work’. Jane wished, in retrospect, that she’d kept that in mind when she’d first started out as a Specter, as it was she found herself seriously considering expanding that truism to ‘more work with fewer resources’. Hell, she hadn’t gotten much Council or Alliance support during the hunt for Saren, but at least she hadn’t had to buy her own damn fuel
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Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 12 2011, 04:26:43 UTC
“Perhaps not the questions you’re thinking of.” Garrus rumbled, soundly suspiciously amused. “I do have a line to the extranet in the Main Battery and InterspeciesRomance.org has a very thorough and enlightening FAQ section
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Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 12 2011, 04:28:09 UTC
“I suppose that’s fair.” Jane agreed and tried to suss out the best route for explaining her particular… problem. “Well, part of it may well be biological and I mean ‘biological’ from an evolutionary standpoint. For my kind, a female orgasm isn’t crucial for reproduction whereas a male orgasm is. All women are capable of one, but we ovulate no matter what. Human males only expel semen during climax, so the faster and more efficient a male’s climax was the more likely he was to pass on his genes. Of course, several million years later this means a lot of men have problems with premature ejaculation, but I suppose it was an evolutionary advantage at the time
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Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 12 2011, 04:29:12 UTC
Jane closed her eyes against a montage of memories that ranged from losing her virginity up against the wall of a nightclub bathroom on her first night free of basic to the accusing eyes of her various boyfriends over the years, all of whom had started out thrilled to be dating a decorated servicewoman (and eventually, a hero) but eventually grew sour when she neglected to perform on command. It was always somehow her fault. As though she’d blamed them for failing to be man enough to satisfy the Famous Commander Shepard
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Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 12 2011, 04:30:30 UTC
He ran his bare talons up her thighs, starting and the knee and working his way up to her hips with a light barely-there pressure that she shouldn’t have even felt but still burned through the tough fabric of her coveralls and made her skin sizzle. “Garrus.” She repeated and -sweet baby Jesus- she was whining
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Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 12 2011, 04:31:41 UTC
“You’re just now realizing this?” She cut off with a moan of anticipation, little more than an exhalation, as he parted her thighs and dropped down to bite at the flesh of her abdomen. She liked the needle-sharp prickle of his teeth normally, but all his ghostly almost-touches had primed her skin for sensation and every nip made her shake all over. When he moved his ministrations to her inner thighs firework lit up all along her spine and for the first time in her entire life, Jane cried out in bed
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Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 12 2011, 04:33:40 UTC
The sensations were indescribable, but rapidly piled up inside her and soon ‘not enough’ because ‘too much’ and a familiar tension sprang up in her muscles as she struggled against the pleasure strumming through her body. The battle was brief, but pitched and when Jane came back to herself she was straddling Garrus’s thighs with her arms thrown around him and his free hand cradling her backside. She went limp against him, both winded and somehow confused
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Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 12 2011, 10:28:18 UTC
This was awesome, really mature and SO GODDAMN HOT I DIED. Wonderfully written, and Garrus dirty-talking... Holy God. I think both my ovaries blew up.
And also, I love the way you write out the problem, it was a wonderfull read, especially after all of the "garrus waves his winky in front of Shep and she orgasms like never before" that plague fanfiction everywhere.
lol OP again
anonymous
August 13 2011, 03:52:35 UTC
Ilu. I totally agree with you on your sentiments, and yes, I am one of those girlies who feel a bit hopeless about being able to come, much less with a partner. -__-
Re: If At First You Don't Succeed...
anonymous
August 14 2011, 19:18:00 UTC
Thank you. Others posting comments already covered this idea... but being similar to femShep as she was in this well-written moving story myself... I too hope that there is a Garrus out there somewhere for me. This story is so well-done and so gentle with femShep's difficulty rather than putting it all on her. Garrus is wonderfully funny and determined in the best possible way. I like the hot 'n' heavy moments of much Garrus fic- but this one really was personal and moving.
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Thank you AuthorAnon for the amazing story and your insightful PSA. The more you know!
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And also, I love the way you write out the problem, it was a wonderfull read, especially after all of the "garrus waves his winky in front of Shep and she orgasms like never before" that plague fanfiction everywhere.
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Oh and I think I speak for alot of people here when I say, Please write more!
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I will keep trying though! :D
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