Query Letter

[marvad]

I'm close to shopping out a middle-grade/YA novel of about 41K words.  Here's the query.  Does it grab you?  Why or why not?

Dear Ms. Agent

<<< personalized paragraph to say why this agent is the best in the entire world. >>> I believe you might be interested in BAD SPELLING, a completed 41,000 word MG/YA fantasy novel about a girl witch whose spells

Comments

[david_de_beer]

perhaps change the first sentence to "I am seeking representaton for my 41,000 word novel, ...."

it looks good to me, but this is an area I have zero knowledge in. Best of luck.