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nova_myth June 11 2008, 01:57:57 UTC
Poor Jazz! I just want to cuddle him, the poor thing. XD e.e

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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 03:13:23 UTC
Yeah, I'm sure you JUST want to cuddle him XP

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nova_myth June 11 2008, 03:20:23 UTC
And risk Prowl's wrath, I don't think so. XD

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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 03:21:51 UTC
Bwahahahahahaha e.e

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jaxink June 11 2008, 02:32:11 UTC
So much sadness for Jazz and Prowl...confessions of their undying love for one another need to happen!! ^^;; I'm not impatient at all....riiiiight. XD

I really like the explanation for the visors. Quite sweet and adorable! Optics only revealed for that special someone. D'awwwwwww!

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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 03:19:38 UTC
Oh, believe me, they will happen. But it'll take its time~ There's other couples I must attend to before these two get their sweet confessions.

I'm so mushy, but I thought it'd be a nice thing if the visors had a symbolic/ritualistic purpose. Glad you like it so far, thank you for reading!

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stormqueen873 June 11 2008, 02:46:14 UTC
*huggles for Jazz* Poor guy! My heart aches for him every time he talks about Prowl -- you've done a wonderful job showing his longing.

And now I'm really curious about how you're going to bring all the one-sided couples together. Jealous!Sunny was cute and Bluestreak is always adorable. X3

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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 03:21:26 UTC
Ohhh, it's a roller coaster I'm afraid. Though, I have to admit Sunstreaker/Bluestreak are going to go far easier than Prowl and Jazz, and sooner, too! XD

Glad you're liking it so far, thanks for reading!

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mmouse15 June 11 2008, 02:53:49 UTC
I love the explanation for the visors, and the glimpses into Soundwave/Blaster, Sunstreaker/Bluestreak, and especially Prowl/Jazz. I like that Jazz's friends all know about Prowl and do their best to support and comfort Jazz. They are true friends, and it's a wonderful look at the group.
Lovely set-up for the next set of lessons, oh yes.

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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 03:23:57 UTC
Oh yes, I am setting up the pace for the other couples to take the spotlight for the next few chapters -though there's going to be increasing 'tension' for Prowl/Jazz during that, too. Mwahaha.

Glad you've liked it, thank you sooo much for reading <3

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mmouse15 June 11 2008, 03:29:16 UTC
I'm glad to hear that! Given Sunstreaker's jealousy here, Bluestreak and he may have something soon. Plus, you've got to let us have the anniversary party that you've been talking about for...a lot of chapters, at least.
Plus there has to be something happening for Blaster and Soundwave and their family!

Yes, there's a lot happening in IC, and I love reading about everybody. It'll be fun to read, especially if you're going to crank the tension between Prowl and Jazz. Oh, this is going to be excellent. *glee*

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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 03:31:57 UTC
There's two parties in the brewing actually. One's a 'royal' kind of thing, that's a set up for Optimus/Starscream happenings. Mwahaha. (And Inferno/Red Alert!)

And the other's pretty much Sunny/Blue and Prowl/Jazz and both of 'em tie to Blaster/Sounders XD

Damn my contrieved and convoluted AU!

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hellsangelcurse June 11 2008, 03:03:45 UTC
*Sighs* Oh Jazz.

I'm half tempted to cuff them together and throw them in a locked closet together, with strict instructions that they aren't getting out until they've confessed and interfaced... repeatedly.

As usual beautifully written and very vivid.
I love the hints of Sunny/Blue.
But we still need to find Sides someone...

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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 03:15:27 UTC
Oh, they'll confess and interface repeatedly eventually, but not yet. Mwahahaha... e_e; Oh yes, I had to start setting up the Sunny/Blue part, too.

Sideswipe: Stop trying to pair me! DX

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hellsangelcurse June 11 2008, 03:18:23 UTC
At this point I think I do it just for the reaction... but then again maybe not. *smirks evilly*

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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 03:20:13 UTC
Sides falls for it every time. *snrk*

Sideswipe: Hey! Dx

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