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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 04:15:08 UTC
Making Sunstreaker jealous is incredibly fun for some reason. XD I'm glad uh... this helped to relax you? XD Thank you for reading!

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dark_daebereth June 11 2008, 04:50:03 UTC
That is a lovely explanation of the visors. And Jazz and Prowl... I'm not sure if I want to hug them in sympathy, or bang my head on the desk repeatedly. Either way, that's gorgeous work. I love this 'verse of yours.

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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 04:58:26 UTC
Hey, I if they're going to get together I'mma take my time putting them through it e.e;;a Besides, that makes the moment of the 'confessions' all the more sweeter. >:3

I'm glad you're liking it so far. Thank you for reading!

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dark_daebereth June 11 2008, 05:05:09 UTC
Oh, I hear ya. Most definitely makes the pay off sweeter. Doesn't make it any less frustrating to watch, though XD

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vejiraziel June 11 2008, 05:07:24 UTC
That's the downside of being the watcher. XD

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__wilderness__ June 11 2008, 09:16:18 UTC
Heee.. look at the clueless Bluestreak! So adorable!

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vejiraziel June 12 2008, 02:58:06 UTC
Clueless Bluestreak is made of awesome and win. Bwahahaha. >w> Thanks for reading!

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ex_naggingf June 11 2008, 20:47:26 UTC
Another wonderful chapter. If Bluestreak had an inkling about Prowl's and Jazz's feeling for each other, I bet the secret would be over pretty darn quick. Somebody needs to tell him...

But I am enjoying the tension and pace of the story; I'm utterly captivated by it! Good job ♥

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vejiraziel June 12 2008, 03:01:36 UTC
I think that's precisely why nobody has told him, they fear he'd spill the beans and Prowl could get upset a Jazz. XD

I'm glad you're liking it so far! Thanks for reading!

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cmdrtekk June 12 2008, 04:34:45 UTC
Tough time for Jazz and Prowl. I just see they may be setting themselves up for a tough time ahead of them for a bit. Appears to be a tough time for several one-sided(?)/potential(?) couples. Oh the Angst! Oh the tension! Oh the suspense! :D

This was a lovely chapter in looking into Jazz. A nod towards Sunstreaker and Bluestreak

Nice info and twist on the visors. I enjoy the general scenes of interaction of the characters with each other.

As always, looking forward to more.

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