Comments | martinicruiser: The Bunny is still alive and kickin'

vejiraziel in martinicruiser

The Bunny is still alive and kickin'

Mar 14, 2008 22:56

Title: Honey, Prime, I shrunk the Kids Officers!
Chapter: 14 - Johnny Inferno Be Good ( Read more... )

sideswipe, shrunk the officers, prowl, red alert, inferno, fan fiction, jazz, mirage, blaster, perceptor, cassettes

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nova_myth March 15 2008, 05:06:56 UTC

o.O Napkin? Why was he fascinated with a napkin for? Origami? Whatever the reason, SO CUTE! Oh bad me, the whole fluttery scene with his doorwings and music made me think of Halloween and him being a cute butterfly. XD

vejiraziel March 15 2008, 05:22:26 UTC

He wasn't fascinated with the napkin itself. The dispenser and the seemingly never ending supply of napkins were what had his attention. XP no DDR Butterfly, now. Thanks for reading!

sakon76 March 15 2008, 05:07:08 UTC

Okay, the "nakkin" at the end killed me. ^_^

Wonderful chapter, as always, leaving me looking forward to the next.

vejiraziel March 15 2008, 05:23:44 UTC

I had the goofiest grin when I was writing that part. XD

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

vericus March 15 2008, 15:33:05 UTC

Yeah, the 'nakkin' killed me too...

vejiraziel March 15 2008, 21:12:39 UTC

I can just imagine Prowl with the most innocent, tender voice offering the 'nakkin' to Jazz XD

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jaxink March 15 2008, 05:16:42 UTC

Little dancin' sparklings! Or well, little sparklings clicking happily at music...still adorable!!!

Loved the ending as well. Kind of reminds me of how little kids look around for the first thing they see and give it to their parents proudly as a present...you know, like a rock or a leaf. I once gave a worm to my mom when I was little. She wasn't as appreciative of it as I was. ^^

vejiraziel March 15 2008, 05:25:13 UTC

Yeah, the idea was precisely that with the fascination babies have with handing whatever they get their hands on to their parents or nearest adult. XD

Thanks for reading!

cheysulinight March 15 2008, 05:39:55 UTC

*squeals* Nakkin! So adorable!

vejiraziel March 15 2008, 05:44:31 UTC

>:3 Prowl's such a cute little Sparkling ain't he? XD

greenangel March 15 2008, 05:45:47 UTC

After a few songs, Inferno felt something on his leg and looked down to see Red Alert bouncing on his little aft at the rhythm of the music.

AAAAAGH SO CUTE x___X;;;

vejiraziel March 15 2008, 05:46:44 UTC

Score for Red Alert! >:D Thanks for reading~

greenangel March 15 2008, 08:05:29 UTC

I just realized that I am gonna be SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FREAKIN SAD when this fic ends. No more little Autobots. 8((((((

vejiraziel March 15 2008, 08:26:55 UTC

DX Well, if it's any help, I have no idea when I'mma end this one. XD

But if you wanna read more little Autobots, there's a lot of 'side stories' for this continuity in my work journal.

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