Because someone is a competitive sparkling.

Mar 04, 2008 17:15

Title: Honey, Prime, I shrunk the Kids Officers!
Chapter: 13 - Smooth Criminal Ambulance ( Read more... )

hound, optimus prime, prowl, red alert, jazz, mirage, blaster, bluestreak, sideswipe, sunstreaker, shrunk the officers, ratchet, fan fiction, inferno, ironhide, perceptor, cassettes

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prowlsgirl March 4 2008, 23:29:04 UTC
ROFLOL Okay this is getting funny. Now Prowl decided to talk after being quiet all through the other fics when he's not crying.

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vejiraziel March 4 2008, 23:41:27 UTC
Why of course. Prowl is crafty like that. XDD

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__wilderness__ March 4 2008, 23:32:58 UTC
*convulsive giggle fit*

... will likely comment when stops laughing...

*deep breath*

Sunstreaker... oh my, that's just so good! And I'm going gaga over the image of sparkling!Red tottering across to Inferno who's wearing this huge smile... and Sunstreaker and Bluestreak swinging Sideswipe... And Prowl.. how can you be so adorable... if you can't walk the walk, you can certainly talk the talk *hides*

This was so adorable!

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vejiraziel March 4 2008, 23:42:32 UTC
XDD The image of the Red Alert with Inferno and Ironhide and Ratchet with Perceptor is too adowable in my mind. XD Yess, Prowl is an adorable little sparkling >3

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!

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smart_blonde223 March 4 2008, 23:43:12 UTC
*gigglefit*

Thanks to you, my keyboard is now covered in soda. Thankies~

But this has got to have been the funniest chapter yet!

"Slagger?" I could imagine the most innocent little look on his face. :D And Sunstreaker can't do anything about it!

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vejiraziel March 4 2008, 23:46:41 UTC
D: Sorry? *hands plastic cover for the keyboard*

e.e;; Yes, he said that with the most innocent face. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!

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*ded from cuteness overload* bumblebee_1983 March 5 2008, 00:08:41 UTC
That is just tooooooooooooooooo cute!

Prowl's lil nicknames for everyone are hysterically funny. My favorites are:

"Oppymus Pwime!"

"Eynhide!"

I iz ded from laughing so much at the image of a baby Prowler learning all these names. And 'slagger' spitting the energon juice out while all the others are laughing.

*deep breath*

I love this story! Keep 'em comin'!

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Re: *ded from cuteness overload* vejiraziel March 5 2008, 08:52:47 UTC
Thanks for reading and glad you liked it. XD The mental image of Prowl doing that assaulted me and didn't want to go away till I'd write this. XD

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kyra_neko_rei March 5 2008, 00:48:44 UTC
You. Are. Primus.

"Slag" and "Slagger" have, between them, made me breathless. Combined with the fact that it's Prowl . . . I'll bet he's going to have himself a good chuckle after he's restored to his adult self.

Sunstreaker spit-take FTW!!!

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vejiraziel March 5 2008, 08:57:32 UTC
Bwahahaha. >:3 Oh, Prowl's going to have a chuckle fest when he finds out he did this as sparkling. Mwahaha.

Thanks for reading!

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kyra_neko_rei March 5 2008, 19:18:19 UTC
I'm still looking forward to the look on Mirage's face when someone informs him he spent several hours kissing Megatron.

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star_lin March 19 2008, 11:56:31 UTC
*blinks* Wait, wasn't Perceptor the one that was kissing Megatron for hours? I think Mirage was busy playing a game of "Run down the Seekers" to be kissing Mega for hours.

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