Comments | martinicruiser: Because someone is a competitive sparkling.

vejiraziel in martinicruiser

Because someone is a competitive sparkling.

Mar 04, 2008 17:15

Title: Honey, Prime, I shrunk the Kids Officers!
Chapter: 13 - Smooth Criminal Ambulance ( Read more... )

hound, optimus prime, prowl, red alert, jazz, mirage, blaster, bluestreak, sideswipe, sunstreaker, shrunk the officers, ratchet, fan fiction, inferno, ironhide, perceptor, cassettes

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vejiraziel March 5 2008, 08:57:50 UTC

Slagger indeed e.e

jaxink March 5 2008, 01:12:01 UTC

I was going "Awwwwwww!" even before I began reading. All I had to do was read the note about first words and steps. Little did I know it would be cuter and funnier than I could imagine!

Poor little frustrated Prowler. I just wanna scoop him up and give him a big hug! But it looks like Jazz has it covered in the comforting department.

Love his first word and his versions of everyone's names.

Beyond cute. ^^

vejiraziel March 5 2008, 08:59:35 UTC

It's not hard to be a baby with relatively heavy door wings XD Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!

cheysulinight March 5 2008, 02:18:51 UTC

I almost choked on my sandwich when Prowl called Sunstreaker Slagger. That's so cute!

Poor Prowl not being able to walk. But at least he talked first. Now he can tell 'Jass' where he wants to go and not have to walk there himself.

And Optimus is there. Jazz called him down so he could brag about his baby Datsun, didn't he?

vejiraziel March 5 2008, 09:07:14 UTC

And 'Jass' will take him wherever the sparkling wants. XD About Optimus... Maaaaybe >w>

Bwahahaha, this one made a lot of people choke or spit fluids~ Bwahahaaha!

cheysulinight March 7 2008, 14:39:26 UTC

I was bored so I read this fic from the beginning again, and I just thought of something. If Wheeljack was in the room with the others when his invention exploded, why isn't he a sparkling too?

vejiraziel March 7 2008, 20:02:49 UTC

Because he was on the far end of the lab when the thing blew and the officers were closer to the invention. XD

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dark_daebereth March 5 2008, 02:28:14 UTC

Just seeing that there was a new chapter made my day. Reading it... *starts another gigglefit*
Aw, trust Prowl to just decide to seem smarter than the rest. Sunstreaker + slagger = pure win.

vejiraziel March 5 2008, 09:08:10 UTC

I'm glad this little bit improved your day. Thanks for reading! >:3 Sunny's going to have to count to one million next time Prowl calls him that way.

lurkerlynne March 5 2008, 02:35:36 UTC

Wonder how many copies of that little scene are going to turn up to torment Prowl after his return to adult hood... Poor little guy, off balance and can't walk on his own.

Hey, can I borrow "Eynhide"? I think that's how Optronix would pronounce it; that or 'Inehide'. God gravy, why did I have him not say his R's? ::headdesk::

vejiraziel March 5 2008, 09:10:22 UTC

Feel free to borrow it at will. XD Yesss, Door wings are fancy, but are one hell of a balance killer. XD

Thanks for reading!

lurkerlynne March 5 2008, 18:50:15 UTC

Speaking of doorwings, have you read Falling by CrimsonStarlight over on Transfictions.net? J/P, regarding the drawbacks and bonuses of having doorwings. Fun stuff.

I recommend taking a look at the rest of the author's stuff- especially The Hatchet's Apprentice (gen) and Prowl and Sideswipe's Excellent Adventure (J/P, genderbending, crack of the first water).

vejiraziel March 5 2008, 20:34:15 UTC

I suppose you've never noticed I watch/am member of the the Prowl x Jazz community in LJ, nor have realized the same vericus that commented here is CrimsonStarlight. XDD To be more especific, I've read all her stuff in the PJ Community and I owe her fanart for her Falling series. XD

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