I'll get this damned thing done, even if work kills meh!

[vejiraziel]

Title: It's More than a Feeling - Hold me, Thrill me, Kiss me, Kill him. (28/30)
Day: Sept 28
Prompt: "Bots behaving badly"
Verse: G1 with a pinch of IDW/WW
Rating: PG-13
Words: 904
Other Characters: Mention of Sentinel Prime.
Warnings: Just a little bit of crack and slashy nonsense.
Summary: The last thing he needed was the two of them working

Comments

[bluebirdsoaring]

Yep, wonderful fluff to start the day off right =)

"perfect excuse for me to misbave" should be Prowl's new answer for everything!!!

A bit of CC:)

[bluetaelon]

hmm.. the first half and the 2nd half almost read like 2 different fics to me, the first half reads more like Prime sent Jazz to get info out of Roadblock and they ended up bonding then it switched to Jazz bonding with Prowl. I think the stuff about Roadblock just throws it all off, to much detail thats not necessary.

Just a thought, I think it might read better if you just got rid of the first 4 paragraphs and started the fic with:

“When I told you I wanted you to get close to him and find what information you could, I really never expect you to take the recommendation of getting close so literally and to spark.” Optimus sighed heavily, looking at his friend’s visor with a tired expression.

and keep from there, would read as more humorous imo but I'm suffering serious sleep deprivation here so take my opinion with a very large grain of salt.

Re: A bit of CC:)

[vejiraziel]

Edited. Thank you. I was feeling the same thing myself. :>

Re: A bit of CC:)

[bluetaelon]

:)

[hunterblues]

“I cannot help but think someone planned this all along to get what he wanted.”

Ah yes, but who planned it? Jazz? Or Prowl?

Cute ficbit, but felt sorry for Prime. Sort of.

[prowlsgirl]

Love it. ^_^

[mmouse15]

You know, when Prowl and Jazz start working together, no bot is safe from them...poor Optimus!

[vejiraziel]

Nope, no bot is safe. XD;