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vejiraziel in martinicruiser

Challenge day 8

Sep 08, 2010 01:12

Title: It's More than a Feeling - Heart. War. (08/30)
Day: Sept 08
Prompt: "Oblivious"
Verse: G1/ War for Cybretron slightly AU
Rating: PG 13
Words: 847
Other Characters: Optimus Prime, Ratchet, Ironhide, Megatron.
Warnings: A little dark, but just a pinch.
Summary: Optimus' Autobots were oblivious.
Notes: For the Sexy September challenge @ prowlxjazz. Happy ( Read more... )

pxj challenges: september 10, war for cybertron, prowlxjazz, au

Comments 15

flybystardancer September 9 2010, 07:17:50 UTC

Oh wow... Neat concept! And poor Prowl. :( *hugs?*

Also, might wanna check the info up at top.

flybystardancer September 9 2010, 07:18:16 UTC

Nevermind, I see that you did while I was reading. Heh.

vejiraziel September 9 2010, 07:19:22 UTC

Thank you. And yeah, I fixed it after I posted, i didn't notice on the rush. XD;<3

wicked3659 September 9 2010, 07:59:08 UTC

I really like this, its a fresh take on an already dark story. I hope you write more WFC stories in the future :)

vejiraziel September 9 2010, 08:01:19 UTC

Thankies. :> WFC ish fuuuun XD<3

purajo September 9 2010, 08:04:58 UTC

mmmm yummy Exodus ficcage... yummy yummy... *noms on it* hmm.. tastes like peaches.

vejiraziel September 9 2010, 08:12:15 UTC

Peaches with Jazz? :D

taralynden September 9 2010, 08:07:02 UTC

oooh! *shivers*

Haven't read Exodus, but I can read into where *this* is going: nowhere good, once Prowl learns how Megatron kills Jazz.

Scary!Prowl is very scary.
(but I still like it!)

vejiraziel September 9 2010, 08:14:55 UTC

Scary Prowl is very scary indeed. And yeah, nowhere good, lol. Glad you liked it!

prancingtiger86 September 9 2010, 12:12:26 UTC

A fantastically written fic! I haven't read Exodus, but scary Prowl certainly seems interesting. Nicely done! :)