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vejiraziel in martinicruiser

It is starting the week with Art

Jul 26, 2010 20:56

Title: The Art of Deception. (12 ( Read more... )

prowlxjazz, art of deception

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vejiraziel July 28 2010, 09:32:25 UTC

That sort of happened. I wasn't planning on that development. XD

bluebirdsoaring July 27 2010, 03:39:44 UTC

Prowl is having what he considers to be fun =)

vejiraziel July 28 2010, 09:32:55 UTC

Oh, he's going to have plenty of fun.

purajo July 27 2010, 04:38:21 UTC

okay... Drift and Lockdown = <3 !

And rawrrr at Smokescreen *sits on Jazz before saboteur does what he does best*

vejiraziel July 28 2010, 09:28:34 UTC

Glad you found them enjoyable >;D

Kekekeke. I knew Jazz would want to rip Smokescreen a new aft with this chapter.

wicked3659 July 27 2010, 05:11:10 UTC

Ooohh Smokescreen, you need to stop prying before Prowl takes an offence to it, for your own good. I just loved the bit with Lockdown and Drift and the developing releationship with Jazz is sweet contrast to the dark undercurrent of this story. Cant wait for more as always XDD

vejiraziel July 28 2010, 09:35:38 UTC

Jazz is going to be the bringer of the lighter tones because the fic's gonna get a wee bit darker still. Drift and Lockdown were fun in this.

sakon76 July 27 2010, 05:37:38 UTC

When and if Smokescreen finds out the truth about Prowl's origins (or at least about his abandonment) he is going to be so fragging shocked. I hope it knocks him but good out of his innate Praxian superiority complex.

And... hmm. I wonder just who it is that Prowl is going to tutor.

Thank you for a lovely chapter! *waits patiently, and eagerly, for the next*

vejiraziel July 28 2010, 09:25:26 UTC

Smokescreen's beliefs and superiority complex are going to be put to the test in ways he's not going to like one bit.

Oh, you'll find out soon!

Thank you for reading!