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vejiraziel in martinicruiser

It is starting the week with Art

Jul 26, 2010 20:56

Title: The Art of Deception. (12 ( Read more... )

Comments 16

prancingtiger86 July 27 2010, 09:03:20 UTC

loved the interaction between Drift and Lockdown, and Smokescreen should really keep his olfactory senses out from where they don't belong before Prowl discovers his intentions. loved it and can't wait for the next update! :)

vejiraziel July 28 2010, 09:37:05 UTC

Smokescreen is really opening a proverbial can of worms.

renegadewriter8 July 27 2010, 18:07:53 UTC

Awww i love how Lockdown cares about Prowl ^.^ Ahh, I didn't understand the last part very wel though *pouts* meh, it's good to see that Jazz like Prowl. Maybe not like like but it's getting closer XD

Grr, Smoky, I like you so you better BACK OFF! XD

vejiraziel July 28 2010, 09:31:54 UTC

They have a few things in common, or Lockdown feels they do, and he doesn't like Smokescreen's intereference.

baroness_lamia July 27 2010, 23:24:31 UTC

I can't help but think Prowl is back to his theiving ways. Oh dear. And I'm really liking how Lockdown is noticing Smokescreen's investigative ways. This story is now interesting to me!

vejiraziel July 28 2010, 09:31:02 UTC

Back? He never left them. There's a few hints in the past chapters that he is still being a mischievous one and his school mates have yet to notice it. XD

Glad the story is interesting to you now. :>

Yay, an update!! ex_naggingf July 29 2010, 00:55:50 UTC

Uh oh. Prowl don't be naughty!!

Smokescreen's one nosy s.o.b. XD