Starting the week with the first part of this

[vejiraziel]

Title: Sparkless. (34 Part 1

Comments

[thepheonixqueen]

NO! Don't leave it there! :( It is so beautiful! I love the detail you put into Jazz's bonding garb and you described the scene in the bedroom just beautifully. I can't wait for more! post soon, pretty please?

Oh and wouldn't it be perfect if jazz 'sparks' on the bonding night! I can just see Jazz and Prowl and little baby Bluestreak (I love having them as a parents/child paring

[kageokami666]

Oh that was just perfect. I love how you plat with the tension by slowly building up to an extremely passionate scene and then gently wind it back down a little (just enough so that we don't go crazy waiting for the next part - for which i thank you) I can't wait to read the next part but for now i think i need a cold shower

[wicked3659]

Oooh this is so beautiful. I love the way you create the atmosphere and sensual built up between them and how you portray the flood of emotions that Prowl experiences at the end of this part is perfectly done. Oh I simply cannot wait for the next part! Please update soon! XD *stalks*

[prancingtiger86]

that was an awesome chapter, i loved how you described Jazz's bonding garb, and built the atmosphere and tension between them. It was perfectly written and now i can't wait for the second part!!

[laratron]

Primus that was beautiful. The detail you put into everything was exquisite. I cannot wait to see what the rest of this scene is like. For now I think I will also take a nice cold shower.