Starting the week with the first part of this

Jan 24, 2010 23:42

Title: Sparkless. (34 Part 1 ( Read more... )

2007verse, sparkless, prowlxjazz, au, nc-17

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hunterblues January 25 2010, 12:43:00 UTC
Love the tenderness here, and the building passion that you know is coming.

I'm going to be so sorry when this ends, you know. You make Monday mornings worth getting out of bed.

Whirlwind

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vejiraziel February 1 2010, 17:51:47 UTC
Thank you. Well, it's not quite -done- yet. XD But I'm glad the fic makes mondays more bearable.<3

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eerian_sadow January 25 2010, 14:22:58 UTC
you horrible, horrible tease. ;)

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vejiraziel February 1 2010, 17:51:11 UTC
Sorry? *puppy optics*

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okami_myrrhibis January 25 2010, 14:44:27 UTC
And I have to wait a week???!!! Please, post the consumation sooner

*offers internetz cookies, sweets, and vitual coptic markers*

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vejiraziel January 25 2010, 19:55:25 UTC
Just until mouse finishes beta-reading the next part XD;

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bluebirdsoaring January 25 2010, 14:52:47 UTC
The mental images of Jazz all decked out are stunning and truly beautiful =) Trax has really outdone himself. I love the idea that Prowl will be speaking and singing words of love to Jazz. Heck, I'd love to find someone who would do that to me!!! But I digress...Prowl and his doubts being swept away by the power of love from Jazz...yep, I think this spark thing is going to go really well =) It reads almost like a song or a dance in its rhythm. Amazing Vej!!!

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primabird January 25 2010, 14:55:36 UTC
I can't help but want to see some art of Prowl seeing Jazz on the berth from this scene...it's beautiful...and should be drawn at some point. Not that I have any talent. Are you truly making us wait till next monday for the next part of this???

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