Aaaand Touchdown! I mean, it's a fanfic!

[vejiraziel]

Title: Bring it On. (7

Comments

[catraven]

How nice to see the traditional view of godparents used. :) I know I have godparents, but I don't even know who they are, nor do I remember them having any real part of my life. So, happy to see Hound and Mirage encouraging Prowl and Jazz to spend time and bond with the sparklings.

Twins! Holy Primus, the numbers are growing exponentially!

Good work!

[quidamling]

Ok, surprise twins are always wonderful. Very very cute, I love how Mirage was nervous then shocked and exstatic. Can't wait for the last of the bitlets, if those already carrying will be the last. :3 Jazz has baby fever, methinks.

and Optimini... seriously needs a time out.

[rainlightautumn]

I really love the use of godparents in here--creative and lovely. This whole fic made me smile, even though Optimini totally needs to get over himself. And that last line--oh ho, Prowl, better watch out! XD

Great job--and thanks for sharing. :)

[vejiraziel]

I just felt this couple gave me the perfect excuse to bring up godparents. To be honest, I always felt those four would be rather close friend-wise. Like those neighbors you invite over for lunch every so often. XD

Glad you liked it, thanks for reading!

[okami_myrrhibis]

Surprise Twins?? HAHAHAHAHA

And watch out PROWL!!!!

[vejiraziel]

Prowl is already wary as heck of Jazz, kekekeke.

Oh yes, Surprise twins. =w= *snrk*

[laratron]

I just love this series you have going here. That was a great chapter! Will Jazz and Prowl ever have their own little bitlet?

[vejiraziel]

=w= Glad you like it, ohh wouldn't you like to know! XD Kekekekee...

Yes, eventually they'll try for their own sparkling... eventually