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The Secret of Being a Grimaldi Chapter 5 and 6

Oct 11, 2010 09:10

Title: The Secret of Being a Grimaldi
Author: Marsabi
Summary: Damian returns and Luke finds out that his family has superpowers.
Disclaimer: These characters are based on ATWT; I own nothing
Rating : NC-17
Warning: SEXUAL CONTENT

Chapter 5

Luke floated on his back, his fingers trailing aimlessly into the water, his eyes gazing up at the night teaming ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

luremagic October 11 2010, 13:39:36 UTC

This was fucking awesommmeeeeee!!!

marsabi October 11 2010, 13:55:26 UTC

Hee! (blushes) thanks

Check back later, cause I have not finished it yet... (but hope to do so by tonight)Taking my time, just like Reid will

msmurph October 11 2010, 19:41:48 UTC

WOW, just WOW. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

marsabi October 11 2010, 20:53:29 UTC

Thanks for reading.

The chapters 1-4 are on my home page too.I'd love you thoughts on the story up to now.It really helps me work on it.

However, this is the really sex orientated chapter lol

I have not yet finished this part yet...but hopefully, I will over the next few days

Thanks for commenting

sexy times and super powers bittersweetreid October 17 2010, 08:32:01 UTC

I hoped that Luke would hear Reid during sexy times and be able to fulfill all his wishes. Would have been hot to read Reid's thoughts and to have Luke doing some sexy talks.
But then, I doubt anybody has any coherent thought at all when having good sex, so this is probably the best way to do it.

Also, when I read about the floating, I instandly thought, Luke would blow Reid while he was floating. But I am not sure, that works. So....I love your sexy times, too. :)

I esp. liked that Luke told Reid, he hadn't had good sex before. And the way Reid reacted. And "I want to 69 with you," and cuddly Reid - \o/.

And this: hilarious! Just ONE small guy, poor Reid.
"But before coming to Oakdale, you just had awesome sex all the time right?"
"I've had my share," Reid said.
Luke heard, Not in soooo long. Medical school. Guy with small dick. Nothing like this.

Love your fic and these chapters. Hope you'll post it soon to the community.

marsabi October 17 2010, 11:22:15 UTC

Thanks! Actually, I'm thinking about a future chapter where Luke can do some of Reid's sex wishes (that he can hear in his mind), as long as Reid is not yet touching him...Do you think that would work? I thought they might enjoy it as a game, and then once Reid starts touching him, Luke can't hear...

Of course, Luke would have nothing but bad sex with Noah (LOL). Luke may have the superpower in this story, but Reid is equally awesome

I want to try to play with your idea of a link and see why those tags don't work , but I really want to post it soon.Oddly, the tags work fine on my home page

BTW, thanks for the other note too!It was so nice of you. I plan to contact SK and hopefully, resolve these issues and just get back to the story