Hit and Run Part 20

[marsabi]

Title: Hit and Run 20 (LAST)
Author: Marsabi
Summary: After Natalie is a victim of a hit- and-run, Reid and Luke’s relationship is tested
Disclaimer: Owned by ATWT
Rating: PG
Warning: Fluffy and some strong language

a/n: This is it! Thanks so much for all the comments; it really kept me going. I appreciated every comment. Here is the end…

Comments

[lurefanatic]

OMG this was truly perfection. Reid's proposal was so sweet and the costume funny. I loved how you wrote them always in character and the love radiating from the screen. You really have a talent for writing a story with all the emotions of life. Throughout this story I felt the love, pain, nervousness of the characters. And this line “My real number? My love number?” Reid smiled. “ It’s one, Luke, only one.” was just so perfect. I really can't explain how much I loved this. Thank you.

[marsabi]

Wow! Thanks so much! This comment was just the best! I'm happy you liked it

[msmurph]

A www. Sad to see it end though.

[marsabi]

Thanks! I felt like that too...Part of me thought about doing the wedding and all, but ...it just felt right to end here. Thank you for the nice comment!

[cas74]

Awwww...that was so sweet and funny! I loved it so much! I'm going to miss this story! Hopefully you have something else coming up???

[marsabi]

Thanks!
Well, did you read the one on Noah Who (I think you did) called Camp Queer? I want to start brainstorming a companion piece. I was thinking about linking it to the community (I am very lazy and never did that) and asking for ideas for the new one...but I'm just in the idea phase; I'm taking a break otherwise LOL

I'm looking forward to reading more of your story- how much does it have to go? Do you know yet?

[cas74]

I did read Camp Queer, and i loved it! I think there are a lot of things you could do with that verse! How Luke deals with his parents reaction to him and Reid...oh, icky Noah could come back and cause some trouble. I will reread the end and see what else pops to mind :)

[marsabi]

Thanks! Would you mind if I write you a message from time to time with some brain storming ideas? I put that link out, but nobody had any ideas for it... I was thinking of a pissed off Casey returning from jail, the return of Damina causing L and R trouble, and that horse ride LOL (Just remembered it for you)...WHat do you think of Luke having to work at Al's (if he is cut off by Damian and does not want Holdens money)? I thought it might be hilarious to see, and Reid lived upstairs... Anyhow, I appreciate any help here when you have a sec!!

[ladynomad915]

Luckily I was able to finish this beautiful story before my ride came.

Honey this story was outstanding I loved it all the way through. You had me from the very first chapter. You did a terrific job. Your writing is terrific I could see everything you wrote in my mind.

I loved all the silliness this chapter had before the proposal started. lol Reid in the suit, him and Luke both babbaling.

“My real number? My love number?” Reid smiled. “ It’s one, Luke, only one.”//loved that part.

[marsabi]

Aww, thanks!!! For this beautiful comment and all the others! I liked the idea of them laughing together right before it turned serious. And I wanted Reid to be romantic when he stopped trying and didn't see himself that way... Thanks again!

[marsabi]

Thanks so much! I liked writing one where the boys were in love from the start to the finish! And I truly hate Chris- he never ends up happy in my fics LOL. Katie did deserve better!

I appreciate the comment!