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marsabi

Hit and Run - Part 3

Dec 03, 2010 11:56

Title: Hit and Run ( Read more... )

lure fiction lure, hit and run, rating: nc-17, gay erotica, lure atwt, lure_atwt, author: marsabi, fanfiction

Comments 6

afiriti_1 December 5 2010, 20:15:32 UTC

jesus, what a story! the fluff part came just in time, cause I was about to have heart attack :)

marsabi January 19 2011, 03:27:08 UTC

Thanks! I know this part is hard to take, but it does get sweeter and sweeter as the story goes on! And hmm...I didn't see your comment in my box, I apologize if this comment is old and I somehow missed it! Thanks for reading!

grog1123 January 19 2011, 02:51:11 UTC

I read this when you were posting but don't think I commented. I'm on my second round here :) That proposal was fucking fantastic. So lovely!!

marsabi January 19 2011, 03:25:50 UTC

Hey,
Thank you for that! I was having a bad night writing something new, and this comment totally cheered me up! I'm glad you liked it!

drunkyluke March 3 2011, 14:18:00 UTC

no luke, make it right now!!! there is no time to waste here. come to your senses. reid didn't mean it. he's hurt. make it right.
loved the proposal!
luke, go back. apologize, beg, plead, but STOP THIS!!!

marsabi March 3 2011, 14:44:03 UTC

Luke realizes his mistake pretty soon and the fix will begin...I hate Chris- no love for him in any of my fics!
Thanks on the proposal! I promise you the angst eases with every chapter... and there is a lot of fun Lucinda in it too

Thanks for the lovely comments- you are making my morning!