The Real LJ Idol * 3 Strikes * Week 1: Black Rainbow

[marlawentmad]

In dreaming

Comments

[roina_arwen]

Lovely! I think this was my favorite section:
her blue veins delicate as moonflower petal,
her lips dark with blackberry juice, a spell
cast for sweetness and abundance.

I also waxed poetic this round - it seems quite a few of us did!

[marlawentmad]

I love when someone pulls out a favorite section. Thank you for sharing that with me. I was happy to see so much poetry this time around too!

[tonithegreat]

Such an evocative poem! I read through a couple of times and I must admit that I was already cold, but this brought shivery thoughts to mind of its own.

[marlawentmad]

I adore that adjective! Thank you for the sweet feedback and the time you spent reading through my offering.

[estelle]

Such varied imagery!

[marlawentmad]

I appreciate you reading and commenting. Thank you!

[itismeangied]

Gorgeous as always! Loved the imagery, especially the cracking ice and shimmering breath. So beautiful, I felt cold reading this, in good way!

[marlawentmad]

Thank you so much for the kind compliment! I appreciate you reading, and as I said before; I am so happy to have you here. I am really looking forward to what other wonders you have to share.

[mollywheezy]

I loved your winter imagery, especially walking boldly into a snow drift.

[marlawentmad]

Thank you kindly! I've had a terrible relationship with winter most of my life. I've been working hard to relate to it in a healthier way.