Chapter 4 - Broken Promises

[mark_angel01]

Title: You let me believe you were someone else

Comments

[jolinarmalkshur]

I've just read these first 4 chapters in one go and i can't wait for the next. i'm dying to know how jared ended up all banged up, poor jared :-(

[mark_angel01]

hey thanks for commenting, more will be on it's way soon, lol there will be more hints to what happened.

[audeamus22]

heyyy im puppetmaster from sinful.. didnt realise you were posting here too...

man once again an awesome update!! I loved the flashback, they all seemed soo happy!! :( kinda made me hate Sandy just a little cause she wanted things to stay the same but it obviously hasnt... but im sure youll come up with the reason right :p

I really am enjoying this!! :D cant wait for more!! :D

[mark_angel01]

hey :) good to see you here, thanks for commenting, lol don't hate Sandy too much it wasn't her fault it all changed, i will update soon

[macbyrne]

this is sooo good; can't wait to find out more about what happened; did Chad do that to Jared when he found out he was gay??? Please, PLEASE update again soon, am dying to find out what happened!!!

[mark_angel01]

thanks :) i'm happy you like it, hmmmm the Chad I write wouldn't do that but maybe he isn't completely innocent, lol it's going to be a long journey to find out what happened.

[angels3]

I think that I may curl into a ball and blubber now.

Can't wait for the next one.

[mark_angel01]

awwww *hugs* sorry about that, it was very bittersweet, it's me fave chapter so far.

[kes1807]

*sniffs* poor Jared *pets him* loved the flashback, but I now have a huge lump in my throat. This just keeps getting better and better, I'm loving it.

Can't wait to see what happened to Jared:)

*hugs*

[mark_angel01]

*hugs* awww i am making people cry lol i just love hurting poor Jared too much, glad your loving it hun *hugs*

[kes1807]

LOL well I hope you take that as a compliment to your writing, to be able to move people to tears, very well done:D