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dm_lunsford January 11 2008, 15:59:52 UTC
A nice piece. Good balance of the tension and friendship. I really enjoyed reading it.

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deaka January 20 2008, 01:01:07 UTC
Thanks so much for reading!

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gabri_jade January 17 2008, 03:12:56 UTC
Still just lovely. We see so few L/M fics where they're just friends - and these days, we hardly ever see any L/M UST at all. Not that the flat out romance isn't great too, but I miss the old UST fics. You do well with both here. Luke and Mara are both perfectly in character for this point in the timeframe, and their interaction is just a thing of beauty - especially all the tech talk about the Fire. Great job. :D

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deaka January 20 2008, 01:02:06 UTC
UST is great fun. :p Thanks for the feedback. *hugs*

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lotusflower85 January 18 2008, 23:48:59 UTC
I too sometimes miss their old not-quite-friends sparring - they are both so perfectly in character here, as always! Love it.

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deaka January 20 2008, 01:05:57 UTC
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. :)

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deaka January 23 2008, 11:02:19 UTC
Thank you! Great to hear you enjoyed it. :D

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dama_jade February 1 2008, 18:18:22 UTC
This is lovely and awesome. I'm sure Mara must have showed the Jade's Fire to Luke once she got it as seeing that they both love flying. A very nice take.

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deaka February 2 2008, 03:47:04 UTC
I've always thought that too. She'd surely want to show off her shiny new ship, and Luke's a fellow pilot, so he would appreciate it.

Thank you for reading. :)

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