Comments | maplarojcan: (fan fiction) Except One

maplarojcan

(fan fiction) Except One

Oct 14, 2009 22:29

Except One
HSJ, Okamoto/Yabu
angst, friendship
pg

an: for the longest time, i've been bugging people about this line "and though i moved my world to be with him, still the gap between us is too wide" (i know him so well, chess) and finally i finished it. it's not what i thought it would be, but this is how it came out and i'm relatively satisfied ( Read more... )

!self-imposed challenges, hsj, fan fiction, listed because im crazy, arLene is my friend ♥, i make my life hard

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hotfruits October 15 2009, 07:17:36 UTC

Lovely

maplarojcan October 15 2009, 08:00:37 UTC

<3!

keeconk October 15 2009, 10:57:15 UTC

<3<3<3<3<3<3

maplarojcan October 15 2009, 12:47:56 UTC

<3!

ichiban_seiyaku October 15 2009, 13:35:43 UTC

Whoa.

This. Is. It. This. Is. Really. Is. It.

maplarojcan October 15 2009, 13:46:11 UTC

i take it you like? YAAAAAAAAY *glomp* thank youuuuu. :)

ichiban_seiyaku October 15 2009, 16:27:35 UTC

I really like it. (Though at first, it wasn't how I pictured out the line to be...but then again, I'm not the writer. haha)

Keito's insights on this one sort of hits the center.

maplarojcan October 16 2009, 15:34:58 UTC

onga eh. :) naramdaman ko lang na hindi ito yung pov mo for it. :) you want to write it ba? (yes, i am very subtle)

hahahaha. :) *huggles*

thank you so much. :) shempre pag hindi mo nagustuhan mahheartbroken lang ako kasi para sayo siya. :)

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kono_sora_ni October 15 2009, 15:28:48 UTC

I keep telling myself to read your fic, you are always so lovely when commenting on mine but I forget. So I remembered now!
Oh man, oh man. This is so lovely, poignant.
There's a very vague sense of Keito's feelings, you'd just have to stop and think about it. The words just flow and I love how this is all tied together.
Good job! :]

maplarojcan October 16 2009, 15:37:51 UTC

aw sweetie, you're such a good writer... for sure i'd read anything you write! you really didn't need to bother reading mine... but thanks!!

ahahahaha thank you very much! i had some difficulty writing it in the middle, and i forgot i mentioned ages in the beginning! so that helped me finish the story. :)

i had too much fun writing it down. :) thank you so much for feeling so positively about it. :)

wooden_buttons October 16 2009, 10:57:53 UTC

Absolutely gorgeous *__*

I am sooooo excited for my fic XDD /shotshotshot

maplarojcan October 16 2009, 15:33:07 UTC

*snuggles* thank you for reading? :) hahaha!

pero ako rin excited isulat! it might take some time though... :(