(fan fiction) Except One

[maplarojcan]

Except One
HSJ, Okamoto/Yabu
angst, friendship
pg

an: for the longest time, i've been bugging people about this line "and though i moved my world to be with him, still the gap between us is too wide" (i know him so well, chess) and finally i finished it. it's not what i thought it would be, but this is how it came out and i'm relatively satisfied

Comments

[ichiban_seiyaku]

Whoa.

This. Is. It. This. Is. Really. Is. It.

[maplarojcan]

i take it you like? YAAAAAAAAY *glomp* thank youuuuu. :)

[ichiban_seiyaku]

I really like it. (Though at first, it wasn't how I pictured out the line to be...but then again, I'm not the writer. haha)

Keito's insights on this one sort of hits the center.

[maplarojcan]

onga eh. :) naramdaman ko lang na hindi ito yung pov mo for it. :) you want to write it ba? (yes, i am very subtle)

hahahaha. :) *huggles*

thank you so much. :) shempre pag hindi mo nagustuhan mahheartbroken lang ako kasi para sayo siya. :)

[ichiban_seiyaku]

wee...you're not heartbroken... :p