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Hakuouki fanfiction - Hijikata/Saitou: "Poem for you", part 1

Feb 06, 2013 15:08

Title: Poem for you
Author: manaika
Series: Hakuouki, between Reimeiroku and Shinsengumi Kitan
Pairing: HijiSai, with a bakatrio threesome and hints of Kondo/Okita and past Tani/Sano on the sideline.
Rating: PG-15 and up. Varies between chapters, but only one is really for Mature Audience, I’ll warn you in time. (IMO 17 and 16 years old would cope, but ( Read more... )

hijisai, hijikata toushizou, fanfic, saitou hajime, anime, hakuoki, shounen-ai/yaoi

Comments 3

jolinar773 February 6 2013, 22:25:11 UTC

Hey :)
It's been a loooong time since I've read a Hakuoki fic, I'm so looking forward to this :)
Although with all do respect, you made a lot of grammatical mistakes...
It disrupts the pleasure of reading through the fic a little...

tokio_fujita February 7 2013, 16:54:16 UTC

Awww this is so sweet! *reading over and over*
Hijikata and Saitou didn't have much conversation. But it's so them.
When Hijikata touched Saitou's cheek and ... nothing happened, this pic came to mind. XD

It's so much fun to see the Baka Trio getting together up to no good (did the CD drama of Shinpachi teasing Saitou help in sparking ideas?), and then quarreling as usual. Poor Heisuke-kun keep getting the short end of the stick. Heisuke sweetie, that's how grown-ups are. You can't win! XD
And I like how Sano handles Hijikata's questioning... and dumps the problem to Heisuke. You're gonna make me start shipping Hijikata and Sano if they keep being this moe! XD

manaika February 7 2013, 19:32:01 UTC

Oh you don't know how glad I am that you like it!
I did think about adding a little more conversation there, but the one thought that kept me from it was, that neither of them is known for saying too much. This scene was written shortly after I read you translation of the conversation between Hijikata and Saitou, where Hijikata doesn't ask Saitou why he left Shieikan and I wanted to keep that voiceless, silent understanding that was between them.

No, not this particular scene, but another one, in a later chapter ^^
I confess, Heisuke will get that end of the stick a lot in this fic, but he's a character that wakes a lot of saidstic, teasing tendencies in me, I can't help it. (The Shinpachi in my head agrees with me.) But he does have a few deeper scenes I m particulary proud of.

You say that and haven't even read the rest. Just wait, I'll make you a fan of them yet. ~_^

Alright. Enough of this, the next chapter is going up now. If you keep spoiling me with such comments, I might end up just posting the fanfic in one go. This ( ... )