Title: Poem for you
Author:
manaikaSeries: Hakuouki, between Reimeiroku and Shinsengumi Kitan
Pairing: HijiSai, with a bakatrio threesome and hints of Kondo/Okita and past Tani/Sano on the sideline.
Rating: PG-15 and up. Varies between chapters, but only one is really for Mature Audience, I’ll warn you in time. (IMO 17 and 16 years old would cope, but
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I did think about adding a little more conversation there, but the one thought that kept me from it was, that neither of them is known for saying too much. This scene was written shortly after I read you translation of the conversation between Hijikata and Saitou, where Hijikata doesn't ask Saitou why he left Shieikan and I wanted to keep that voiceless, silent understanding that was between them.
No, not this particular scene, but another one, in a later chapter ^^
I confess, Heisuke will get that end of the stick a lot in this fic, but he's a character that wakes a lot of saidstic, teasing tendencies in me, I can't help it. (The Shinpachi in my head agrees with me.) But he does have a few deeper scenes I m particulary proud of.
You say that and haven't even read the rest. Just wait, I'll make you a fan of them yet. ~_^
Alright. Enough of this, the next chapter is going up now. If you keep spoiling me with such comments, I might end up just posting the fanfic in one go. This really made my day!
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