Hakuouki fanfiction - Hijikata/Saitou: "Poem for you", part 2

[manaika]

Title: Poem for you
Author: manaika
Series: Hakuouki, between Reimeiroku and Shinsengumi Kitan
Pairing: HijiSai, with a bakatrio threesome and hints of Kondo/Okita and past Tani/Sano on the sideline.
Rating: PG-15 and up. Varies between chapters, but only one is really for Mature Audience, I’ll warn you in time. (IMO 17 and 16 years old would cope, but

Comments

[tokio_fujita]

A quick reply (sumimasen~) since I got a plane to catch in 2 hours and won't have internet access for the next 5 days. ^^;

I love how deep you go on Shieikan part.
Oh and Sano & Shinpachi's quarrel again... Calling each other a pervert. XD

This is so sweet. Both Hijikata and Saitou tend to be thoughtful and takes a step back, without asking. But this time it turned out the wrong way. Hijikata-san you painted yourself into a corner! ^^;

[manaika]

Aww...You'll miss the best parts!
But, once you're back, the entire fanfic will be on. ^^

I'm glad! It were your translations of the interludes that inspired me. I wanted to go into the Shieikan part a bit, because a) I know it's not stated why Saitou left and b) I wanted to play a little with Saitou's inner life.

I can't actually keep SanoShin from not quarreling. I didn't even think it'd be such fun to write Bakatrio parts untill I did it. xD

The scene with Hijikata misunderstanding Saitou, was sparked by a friend who had said to me some time ago "Oh yes, Hijikata-san sees everything...besides what's in front of his nose." I thought about it and decided it gave a nice twist to this fic.

I'm glad you like it! I'm going to update, then when you get back, you'll have it all for yourself! ^^

Have a good trip! ^^