Hero's Anthem

[mamas_minion]

Estrella perched, barely breathing, on the edge of Deandre’s bed, watching intently for any signs of change.  He was resting fitfully.  His wounds had been dressed, but he had not yet regained consciousness.  Hovering over her lover’s mangled body, Estrella wept, softly, trying not to be nervous

Comments

[reckless_blues]

"Wept, softly, trying not to be nervous." I liked this, it was somehow so tenderly phrased. And it paints such a picture of her character.

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I was hoping to convey her tenderness and affections towards Diandre.

[rayaso]

I enjoyed this very much, especially having the song heal Deandre. You also point out the problem of being a siren -- would he love her without the song?

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I wanted to show that her song could also be helpful,He may love her without the song, I may incorporate that into another story.

[roina_arwen]

I like that her song can heal. It's definitely an added bonus!

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I wanted to add a little twist to her abilities.

[penpusher]

Really well crafted and a nice balance of the gravity and levity of the situation, something that isn't easy to do well!

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I didn't want to be to heavy with this story.

[i_17bingo]

I like most the ambiguity of their relationship. And I wonder if there's any way to know for sure.

[mamas_minion]

I will probably revisit these characters and answer those questions